The Journey of Life
Let the Holy Spirit in you be your guide.2 total reviews
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice image and presentation.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-A good contrast between stumbling blocks and stepping stones.
-The message is a good one, as well.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2024
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-Nice image and presentation.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-A good contrast between stumbling blocks and stepping stones.
-The message is a good one, as well.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2024
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Thank for your kind words and good luck wish. The name in the notes is the author of the quote...not me.
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You are welcome. It was confusing because the quote in the notes was from the Bible. Was your poem a quote? I took the part about the name out of your review.
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You're absolutely right...it was very confusing. It was a quote inside a quote. Only the last portion of the last line was a quote from the Bible. To avoid this, I removed the author's name. Thank you for your review and bringing that to my attention.
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You are very welcome for the comments, and I appreciate your reply explaining what you did.
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
Excellent writing. It is full of good sensory words and vibrant imagery. The image supports your words well. Thank you for sharing this. Many writers will relate to this. I enjoyed reviewing it.
Best wishes!
Alex
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2024
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Excellent writing. It is full of good sensory words and vibrant imagery. The image supports your words well. Thank you for sharing this. Many writers will relate to this. I enjoyed reviewing it.
Best wishes!
Alex
Comment Written 03-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2024
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Thank you for your kind words and complimentary review.
