Dreams and Roots
Worth the wait32 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Jessica,
This is a good poem about the hope and beauty that flowers bring to us,
They are a sign of better things to come.
I think it ironic that you chose a dandelion as your "flower" since it is a weed that takes nourishment from other garden plants. Though they do show us Spring is here and we have a lot of work to do.
Congrats on placing second in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Have a great rest of the day.
Joan
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2024
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Hi Jessica,
This is a good poem about the hope and beauty that flowers bring to us,
They are a sign of better things to come.
I think it ironic that you chose a dandelion as your "flower" since it is a weed that takes nourishment from other garden plants. Though they do show us Spring is here and we have a lot of work to do.
Congrats on placing second in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Have a great rest of the day.
Joan
Comment Written 11-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2024
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Thank you so much, Joan!
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My pleasure, Jessica.
Joan
Comment from Caroline M England
Beautiful poem with lovely rhythm, simply expressed but moving sentiments which echo that longing we feel after a long winter. Really well done and congratulations.
Best wishes
Caroline
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2024
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Beautiful poem with lovely rhythm, simply expressed but moving sentiments which echo that longing we feel after a long winter. Really well done and congratulations.
Best wishes
Caroline
Comment Written 10-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2024
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Thank you so much, Caroline! I apologize for my delayed response. I am catching up today! lol
Xo
Jessica
Comment from sherrygreywolf
Beautiful entry for the contest. Your words paint a vivid picture for the reader, especially those of us waiting for spring's warmer weather. Syllable count is correct and I saw no needed corrections.
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2024
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Beautiful entry for the contest. Your words paint a vivid picture for the reader, especially those of us waiting for spring's warmer weather. Syllable count is correct and I saw no needed corrections.
Comment Written 05-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2024
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Thank you so much, Sherry! Xo
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
Your picture is absolutely gorgeous. Your poetry is very nice as well. It is hard to write these little ones isn't it. Good luck on the contest, have a great week.
:-) Karen
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2024
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Your picture is absolutely gorgeous. Your poetry is very nice as well. It is hard to write these little ones isn't it. Good luck on the contest, have a great week.
:-) Karen
Comment Written 05-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2024
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Thank you so much, Karen! Xo
Comment from Jacob1395
I love this image of spring waiting to poke through the frozen ground. It does seem that spring is on the horizon and the longer nights are starting to return. An excellent piece of writing.
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2024
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I love this image of spring waiting to poke through the frozen ground. It does seem that spring is on the horizon and the longer nights are starting to return. An excellent piece of writing.
Comment Written 05-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2024
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Thank you so much, Jacob!
Comment from Dawn Munro
Oh, this is surely a worthy entry for this contest, especially in light of the winter snowstorms that have been hammering our eastern coastlines. it is lovely!
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2024
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Oh, this is surely a worthy entry for this contest, especially in light of the winter snowstorms that have been hammering our eastern coastlines. it is lovely!
Comment Written 05-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2024
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Thank you so much, Dawn! Xo
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it was my pleasure. :)
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a beautifully written poem. Very lovely photo to compliment your words as well. Nice rhyming . Good luck in the contest. Very nicely done.
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2024
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This is a beautifully written poem. Very lovely photo to compliment your words as well. Nice rhyming . Good luck in the contest. Very nicely done.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2024
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Thank you, Joanne! Xo
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Your welcome 🙂
Comment from Deborah Dybowski
Your poems are always so beautifully written. I feel that this poem is about hope. Hope for a new season after a cold winter. I like your idea of a garden beneath the winter's snow waiting to reveal itself.
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2024
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Your poems are always so beautifully written. I feel that this poem is about hope. Hope for a new season after a cold winter. I like your idea of a garden beneath the winter's snow waiting to reveal itself.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2024
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Deborah, that means so much to me. Thank you! Xo
Comment from June Sargent
And I can't wait for my garden to rise again! Great entry for the contest. We can all relate as we look forward to an early spring. Dreaming through the month of February...
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2024
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And I can't wait for my garden to rise again! Great entry for the contest. We can all relate as we look forward to an early spring. Dreaming through the month of February...
Comment Written 04-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2024
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Thank you, June! Xo
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice image and presentation, Jessica.
-You have used your 20 syllables well with a good topic.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-I like how you begin with the winter scene with
the garden beneath the snow.
-Very good closing lines about the dream of spring.
-A good entry; good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2024
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-Nice image and presentation, Jessica.
-You have used your 20 syllables well with a good topic.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-I like how you begin with the winter scene with
the garden beneath the snow.
-Very good closing lines about the dream of spring.
-A good entry; good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2024
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Thank you so much, Pam! Xo
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You are welcome, Jessica.
