The Devil's Sonata # 104
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Comment from dragonpoet
Hi B&S,
I like the mix of end and internal rhyme in this abab rhyming poem using music as a strong extended metaphor for the way sin hounds us. I hope the the speaker's depression wanes and his/her prayers are answered.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Have a great rest of the weekend.
Joan
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Hi B&S,
I like the mix of end and internal rhyme in this abab rhyming poem using music as a strong extended metaphor for the way sin hounds us. I hope the the speaker's depression wanes and his/her prayers are answered.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Have a great rest of the weekend.
Joan
Comment Written 11-Feb-2024
Comment from Julie Helms
This is a thought-provoking poem. Imagining the devil grinning while playing the mandolin is quite the picture! Also this has a very interesting point of view... someone trying to dig themselves out of hell. I assume that it has a metaphorical meaning of digging oneself out of a deep place they've gone to.
Thanks for sharing! Julie
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This is a thought-provoking poem. Imagining the devil grinning while playing the mandolin is quite the picture! Also this has a very interesting point of view... someone trying to dig themselves out of hell. I assume that it has a metaphorical meaning of digging oneself out of a deep place they've gone to.
Thanks for sharing! Julie
Comment Written 04-Feb-2024
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Digging ourselves out of a rut of deep depression takes quite a climb it seems here in your lighthearted post, I enjoyed your inventive post, love Dolly x
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Digging ourselves out of a rut of deep depression takes quite a climb it seems here in your lighthearted post, I enjoyed your inventive post, love Dolly x
Comment Written 27-Jan-2024
