Reviews from

2024 Japanese Poetry

Viewing comments for Chapter 11 "Rain Drizzles"
x

8 total reviews 
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Claude Monet was certainly one of the best impressionist artists. Thank you for sharing this gorgeous presentation with us. Every part of it is perfect. I'm honored to get to view and read it.

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2024

reply by the author on 25-Jan-2024
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from shelley kaye
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

there are flowers called "adam and eve"? interesting...
the only gardening i do is planting words on the page for poems to bloom lol

great gogyohka!
wonderful imagery - love rain drizzling...

thank you for sharing
shelley :)

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2024

reply by the author on 25-Jan-2024
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

This is a lovely poem with the picture as a beautiful accent. I like how you carried out the theme of Paradise. It's interesting that the Adam and Eve plant is poisonous.

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2024

reply by the author on 25-Jan-2024
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from GWHARGIS
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

I think this was beautiful. I'm familiar with birds of paradise and water lilies, but honestly, I've never heard of the Adam and Eve plant. I love when I learn about something new. This was a lovely and relaxing image to envision. Thank you fir sharing. Gretchen

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2024

reply by the author on 25-Jan-2024
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from Gloria ....
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

This is a most appealing Gogyohka Poem, visually and verbally.

One can hear the rains drizzle in this Garden of Eden.

Just one small typo:

f l u r i s h i n g
flourishing

Much enjoyed. :)

Gloria

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2024

reply by the author on 25-Jan-2024
    Thank you, Gloria, I fixed it. (*+*)

    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from Jasmine Girl
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Your poem flows very smoothly and it almost sounds like a lullaby. I didn't know there is a flower called "Adam and Eve flower." I love your presentation. It's like an eye candy.

Well done.

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2024

reply by the author on 25-Jan-2024
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

What a beautiful presentation supporting this well written colorful poem. I have never heard of Adam and Eve flowers. This was a pleasure to review. The images truly helped to bring it all to life. Best wishes!

Alex

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2024

reply by the author on 24-Jan-2024
    Thank you very much, Alex (*÷*)

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from patcelaw
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Very beautifully done and a very nice presentation. I wish you the very best with all of your writing. Also, wish you a pleasant evening and may God bless you as you continue to share with us.

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2024

reply by the author on 24-Jan-2024
    Thank you very much, Patricia (*÷*)

    Gypsy hugs