Note to Lady Raven
A little gothic valentine33 total reviews
Comment from ~Dovey
Hi Clockwise!
Your ode to the Lady Raven is beautifully written. The entire presentation is perfect. Excellent rhyme and inspiring word choices make this a delight to read and review.
Kim
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Hi Clockwise!
Your ode to the Lady Raven is beautifully written. The entire presentation is perfect. Excellent rhyme and inspiring word choices make this a delight to read and review.
Kim
Comment Written 14-Apr-2024
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Clockwise.
I liked the rhyming free verse poem that uses repetition well to strengthen the emotion. It seems this man really did love this woman who left him, it seems be death because her new home is in outer space.
This goes well with the artwork well. I like the name Lady Raven because of the raven on her shoulder. Is this an allusion to Poe's "The Raven"?
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Enjoy the rest of your weekend.
Joan
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Hi Clockwise.
I liked the rhyming free verse poem that uses repetition well to strengthen the emotion. It seems this man really did love this woman who left him, it seems be death because her new home is in outer space.
This goes well with the artwork well. I like the name Lady Raven because of the raven on her shoulder. Is this an allusion to Poe's "The Raven"?
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Enjoy the rest of your weekend.
Joan
Comment Written 13-Apr-2024
Comment from Boogienights
I love this poem, reminising about an unforgettable woman. Very descriptive, with just the right amount of longing and regret. I love the title of this piem, it has an exotic air to it.
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I love this poem, reminising about an unforgettable woman. Very descriptive, with just the right amount of longing and regret. I love the title of this piem, it has an exotic air to it.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2024
Comment from Jodi Ann Anderson
I love the descriptive words you use in this, like when you say, "...an avalanche in little sips." It has a nice flow and rhyme too, and I love the repetition of "I loved..." Also, the picture and font color gives it a nice pop!
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I love the descriptive words you use in this, like when you say, "...an avalanche in little sips." It has a nice flow and rhyme too, and I love the repetition of "I loved..." Also, the picture and font color gives it a nice pop!
Comment Written 13-Apr-2024
Comment from hullabaloo22
Wow! What a bittersweet poem this was. The descriptions built up a real picture of Lady Raven and the times that were shared. The rhyming was great, and the picture quite stunning.
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Wow! What a bittersweet poem this was. The descriptions built up a real picture of Lady Raven and the times that were shared. The rhyming was great, and the picture quite stunning.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2024
Comment from royowen
This Lady Raven is quite a gal, she's nobody's fool, and exactly the sort of female that has everything. This is beautifully presented, a work of art and comment, that has plenty of interesting comment, language Rich, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
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This Lady Raven is quite a gal, she's nobody's fool, and exactly the sort of female that has everything. This is beautifully presented, a work of art and comment, that has plenty of interesting comment, language Rich, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 13-Apr-2024
Comment from tfawcus
I love your words
Their lyric style
And their humour
Made me smile
I thought this little Valentine
Of its type, quite sublime
I haven't seen
In quite some time
A rhythmic song
With clever rhyme
To match your words to Lady Raven.
In simple terms - they're close to heaven.
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I love your words
Their lyric style
And their humour
Made me smile
I thought this little Valentine
Of its type, quite sublime
I haven't seen
In quite some time
A rhythmic song
With clever rhyme
To match your words to Lady Raven.
In simple terms - they're close to heaven.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2024
Comment from Sallyo
I'd un-cap Avalanche and maybe remove "make" from "make not mistake" but apart from these (just personal prefs) I think this is grand. I love poems with refrains, and I also like the rather bleak humour.
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I'd un-cap Avalanche and maybe remove "make" from "make not mistake" but apart from these (just personal prefs) I think this is grand. I love poems with refrains, and I also like the rather bleak humour.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2024
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I enjoyed the rhyme pattern of this poem, it really bounced along. It's sad, though, because for everthing he loved about her, she still had to leave. His home was not for her. Excellent. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2024
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I enjoyed the rhyme pattern of this poem, it really bounced along. It's sad, though, because for everthing he loved about her, she still had to leave. His home was not for her. Excellent. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 04-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2024
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Your thoughtful feedback means a lot to me, and I'm truly grateful for your kind words. Thank you!
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
This is an interesting poem about your love and the many ways and things you loved about your lover. But what a sad ending that you are just not the home that loved one longed for.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2024
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This is an interesting poem about your love and the many ways and things you loved about your lover. But what a sad ending that you are just not the home that loved one longed for.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2024
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Your thoughtful feedback means a lot to me, and I'm truly grateful for your kind words. Thank you!
