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Viewing comments for Chapter 54 "my pen whispers"keep your hope alive....
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Comment from Pearl Edwards
I think many of us can relate to your twelve words here. Allowing our pen to whisper the words we may not otherwise say is truly a blessing, I think. Well presented and well written. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2024
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I think many of us can relate to your twelve words here. Allowing our pen to whisper the words we may not otherwise say is truly a blessing, I think. Well presented and well written. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 17-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2024
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so true! thank you pearl :-)
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
When I read verses like this, I think of Robert Frost's famous quote: "I've never started a poem yet whose end I knew. Writing a poem is discovering." Nicely done here and a great contender! Good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2024
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When I read verses like this, I think of Robert Frost's famous quote: "I've never started a poem yet whose end I knew. Writing a poem is discovering." Nicely done here and a great contender! Good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 17-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2024
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i love that quote!! thank you debbie :-)
Comment from QC Poet
A very different format left me wondering how you got the words to not have much space between the sentences. I read your terrific notes on the gogyohka poem format and must Thank you for the introduction to it. I definitely will attempt to write one in the near future. Good Luck with your entry to the 12 word poetry contest.
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2024
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A very different format left me wondering how you got the words to not have much space between the sentences. I read your terrific notes on the gogyohka poem format and must Thank you for the introduction to it. I definitely will attempt to write one in the near future. Good Luck with your entry to the 12 word poetry contest.
Comment Written 17-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2024
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lol thank you qc :-)
Comment from rspoet
This is an excellent poem for the twelve word contest.
Poet will definitely relate to the topic of the importance of words.
Many find freedom in writing.
Excellent art work to match.
Well done.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2024
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This is an excellent poem for the twelve word contest.
Poet will definitely relate to the topic of the importance of words.
Many find freedom in writing.
Excellent art work to match.
Well done.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert
Comment Written 17-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2024
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thank you robert :-)
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Wow, I wish I had a six -
my pen
w h i s p e r s
unspoken thoughts
r a c i n g within ----
my voice found in ink. - perfection overload. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2024
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Wow, I wish I had a six -
my pen
w h i s p e r s
unspoken thoughts
r a c i n g within ----
my voice found in ink. - perfection overload. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 17-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2024
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lol thank you iza :-)
Comment from Yusita
I think you nailed the prompt with this piece. Splendid imagery here... and I love how you said "my voice found in ink". These little writes of yours are a pleasure to read.
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2024
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I think you nailed the prompt with this piece. Splendid imagery here... and I love how you said "my voice found in ink". These little writes of yours are a pleasure to read.
Comment Written 17-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2024
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thank you yusita! :-)
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
This is an imaginative, clearly stated entry for the challenge. The image and complete presentation, served to support your words and meaning. I enjoyed reviewing this and I understand your sentiment; I can relate. Being able to put pen to paper is a gift and a blessing. Thank you for sharing this and best wishes!
Alex :)
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reply by the author on 17-Jan-2024
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This is an imaginative, clearly stated entry for the challenge. The image and complete presentation, served to support your words and meaning. I enjoyed reviewing this and I understand your sentiment; I can relate. Being able to put pen to paper is a gift and a blessing. Thank you for sharing this and best wishes!
Alex :)
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Comment Written 17-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2024
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so true! thank you alex :-)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Inking the page with our thoughts is just what writers do and we soon then find our words are given life without even being spoken, a fun post, love Dolly x x x
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reply by the author on 17-Jan-2024
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Inking the page with our thoughts is just what writers do and we soon then find our words are given life without even being spoken, a fun post, love Dolly x x x
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Comment Written 17-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2024
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yup!! thank you dolly :-)
