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Viewing comments for Chapter 54 "my pen whispers"keep your hope alive....
28 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi,
This is the perfect way to describe all writing, not just poetry. I like the personification of the pen.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Have a great weekend.
Joan
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2024
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Hi,
This is the perfect way to describe all writing, not just poetry. I like the personification of the pen.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Have a great weekend.
Joan
Comment Written 18-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2024
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thank you joan :-)
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No problem.
Joan
Comment from Mark D. R.
Yes, your pen created a nice entry for this contest.
It brings to mind, the quill and ink pot used by ancient scribes.
IMHO the large font is unnecessary to display your poem. Artwork is nice!
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2024
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Yes, your pen created a nice entry for this contest.
It brings to mind, the quill and ink pot used by ancient scribes.
IMHO the large font is unnecessary to display your poem. Artwork is nice!
Comment Written 18-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2024
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thank you mark :-)
Comment from jim vecchio
I'm glad he didn't name the work after himself or I'd never be able to spell it! Your illustration fits me except I start at the small part and work my way smaller. I need your expertise in design and poetic wording to induce me to do better.
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2024
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I'm glad he didn't name the work after himself or I'd never be able to spell it! Your illustration fits me except I start at the small part and work my way smaller. I need your expertise in design and poetic wording to induce me to do better.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2024
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LOL! thank you jim 😅😁👍💓🖊️🦄
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Love your words (and emoji!)
Comment from Daylily
This is an interesting posting offering a studied perception into human behavior. It is an excellent entry in the 12 Word Poetry Contest. The artwork prompts further contemplation and coordinates well with the message of thought and action.
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2024
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This is an interesting posting offering a studied perception into human behavior. It is an excellent entry in the 12 Word Poetry Contest. The artwork prompts further contemplation and coordinates well with the message of thought and action.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2024
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thank you lily :-)
Comment from Janet Foor
Excellent in every way. Your 12-word GOGYOHKA poem is grammatically connected, the words fit the artwork, and I enjoyed reading it.
Very well done.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2024
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Excellent in every way. Your 12-word GOGYOHKA poem is grammatically connected, the words fit the artwork, and I enjoyed reading it.
Very well done.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 18-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2024
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thank you janet! :-)
Comment from Rachelle Allen
This, Mystery Poet, is absolutely EXQUISITE!! It's so different from all the rest here, and soo elegant and thought-provoking and beautifully drawn, both with your chosen words and visually. To me, this one has Winner's Circle written ALLLLLL over it! Good luck!! xo
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2024
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This, Mystery Poet, is absolutely EXQUISITE!! It's so different from all the rest here, and soo elegant and thought-provoking and beautifully drawn, both with your chosen words and visually. To me, this one has Winner's Circle written ALLLLLL over it! Good luck!! xo
Comment Written 18-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2024
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sure hope so lol! thank you rachelle :-)
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and presentation.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-You have used your 12 words well
with a good topic.
-Effective imagery and personification
describing your pen.
-A very good concluding line.
-Thanks for sharing it.
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2024
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-Nice artwork and presentation.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-You have used your 12 words well
with a good topic.
-Effective imagery and personification
describing your pen.
-A very good concluding line.
-Thanks for sharing it.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2024
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thank you pam :-)
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You are welcome.
Comment from royowen
That's true, I've often thought this, I usually think of what I think is a theme, but to my surprise my pen takes me in a different direction, this is beautifully written, you've a truth and a revelation, well done, good luck blessings Roy
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2024
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That's true, I've often thought this, I usually think of what I think is a theme, but to my surprise my pen takes me in a different direction, this is beautifully written, you've a truth and a revelation, well done, good luck blessings Roy
Comment Written 18-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2024
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thank you roy :-)
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Most welcome
Comment from Navada
What a powerful combination of the written word and the visual image. I'm sure we can all relate to this! Sometimes my mouth or my pen struggle to funnel everything happening in my mind, but at other times, there are just tumbleweeds rolling by up there! :)
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2024
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What a powerful combination of the written word and the visual image. I'm sure we can all relate to this! Sometimes my mouth or my pen struggle to funnel everything happening in my mind, but at other times, there are just tumbleweeds rolling by up there! :)
Comment Written 17-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2024
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yup! thank you navada :-)
Comment from Wendy G
A perfect illustration, and a very interesting poem. We are indeed like that - what we say and what we write is a tiny part of who we are and what we think. Meaningful, creative, and well-expressed. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2024
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A perfect illustration, and a very interesting poem. We are indeed like that - what we say and what we write is a tiny part of who we are and what we think. Meaningful, creative, and well-expressed. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 17-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2024
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yup! thank you wendy :-)
