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2024 Japanese Poetry

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Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Yes, and bees are important to the pollination of those flowers. I know bees are necessary for our environment. I'm just happiest when they stay away from me. I'm very allergic to them. Your presentation was beautiful.

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2024

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    Thank you very much, Barbara.

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Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell
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I loved this one where you used personification in different ways. The ideas are great as are your chosen words. The picture accentuates the poem excellently.

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2024

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    Thank you very much, Barbara.

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Comment from Sugarray77
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I love your post and the beautiful way you handled the Fibonacci poetic form. Your chosen artwork also help to set up the tone of loveliness... you are very good at choosing artwork, Gypsy. I enjoyed this and because of it, I have tried to craft one too. I plan to post it later. A fun form. Much enjoyed.

Melissa

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2024

reply by the author on 17-Jan-2024
    Yes, I just founded and it's similar to Japanese poetry with the syllables count and succinctly chosen words.

    Thank you very much, Melissa.

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Comment from shelley kaye
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i just learned about this poem - it's cool!
love the bees and honey theme in this
last line is kinda "satori-ish" lol
great imagery and smooth flow

thank you for sharing
shelley :)

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2024

reply by the author on 16-Jan-2024
    Yes, it's haikuish :)

    Thank you very much, Shelley.

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Comment from lyenochka
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Those are such pretty bees! I don't think I've noticed that they have such butterfly-like wings. I'm glad that bees make honey and I hope they don't mind sharing. It's really a very nutritious thing!

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2024

reply by the author on 16-Jan-2024
    Yes, honey is delicious and bees are fun to watch when Atticus and I go for a walk. They are necessary for our ecosystem.

    Thank you very much, big sister.

    Love,
    Marival
Comment from QC Poet
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Hello it's Good to come across interesting poetic styles- I don't know if your note on its composition got scrambled on uploading as it happens in me on occasion. The poem itself is Very Good, I think the font size may have carried the lines over a little bit. I look forward to reading more of your work now that I'm feeling better and writing again. Thanks for Sharing and Good Blessings to you

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2024

reply by the author on 16-Jan-2024
    I fixed my author notes, thanks!

    Thank you very much, QC.

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Comment from GWHARGIS
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I like your poem. It was simple and very organic. Sitting in 26 degree weather, it gave me hope for warmer and nicer weather. This was a very cool type of poem. Gretchen

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2024

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    Thank you very much, Gretchen.

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Comment from patcelaw
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This is nicely written, and I enjoyed reading it. I wish you the very best with all of your writing house so wish you a very good week. God bless. Patricia.

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2024

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    Thank you very much, Patricia.

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