Comment from LateBloomer

Excellent

Hi Gypsy, this poem is wonderful, and it is filled with vivid imagery. I can see the whole scene. Of special note:

queen of the night's cup
full of wishes

(And sometimes, wishes come true.)

Beautiful presentation. Well done. Xo. Margaret

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 16-Jan-2024

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Have a wonderful day, Margaret.

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Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

I have always made wishes on shooting stars. I thought that's just how it's done. LOL Thank you for sharing your beautiful poem and presentation with us. Your talent shines through again.

 Comment Written 15-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 16-Jan-2024

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Have a wonderful day, Barbara.

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Comment from GWHARGIS

Excellent

I absolutely love to watch shooting stars. I've only seen one meteor shower in my lifetime. It was such a beautiful and exciting thong to watch. I do make a wish on shooting stars. Breath taking. Gretchen

 Comment Written 15-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 15-Jan-2024

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

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Comment from aryr

Excellent

I wonder why the Queen of night does not occur at night, Gypsy. What a shame that it does not occur at night. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 15-Jan-2024

The queen of night is a flower that blooms at night.

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Blessed be.

Gypsy hugs

reply by aryr on 16-Jan-2024

So I see. You are so welcome, Gypsy.

Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell

Excellent

This is beautifully written for a shooting star. Your description is creative with your metaphors of the sky as a cup and and the shooting star as a flower. Lovely!

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 15-Jan-2024

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

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Comment from Debi Pick Marquette

Excellent

Oh Gypsy, I love this. Always beautiful presentation, and poem. But in this one, the personification of the flower as the star. I love wishing upon a star. At least that is how I see it. I think you know by now that I am not too proud to guess even if I don't know the exact meaning. However, that is how I will learn more about this lovely gogyohka form.
One of the things I love most about you is your mystique. You mesmerize me with your beautiful artforms. Love, Debi

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 14-Jan-2024

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words, my friend.

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Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Oh, I had to read your notes to understand the "queen of the night's cup
full of wishes." Meteors are so fun to watch. But I can't think of them "wandering" as they seem to be streaking across with clear determination!

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 14-Jan-2024

Thank you very much, big sister.

Love,

Marival

Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

i've never actually seen a shooting star before...
well, maybe some night...

great gogyohka
love the image of a shooting star wandering across the sky...

thank you for sharing
shelley :)

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 14-Jan-2024

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

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Comment from kahpot

Excellent

What a beautiful form this is, and a wonderful poem, "to wish upon a star" as always excellent presentation and words, (the royal blue sky) this line seems to enhance the wish****kahpot

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 13-Jan-2024

Thank you very much, my friend.

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Comment from zanya

Excellent

So wistful and beautiful and filled with longing - portrayed not just in beautiful language and imagery but also with a lovely pic to illustrate - thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 13-Jan-2024

Thank you very much, zanya.

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