Comment from Mark Schardine

Exceptional

This combination of picture and words is a real joy for the reader, who sees this remarkable expression of a happy relationship, one that once begun, will continue.

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 11-Jan-2024

Thank you very much for your exceptional six stars review and kind words.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from Ulla

Excellent

Oh, Marival this is such a lovely love poem written in a Tanka Suit. I simply loved it. The form is perfect for theme. What a joy to read. You are such an expert on this the imagery and the words chosen are exquisite. UN abrazo, Ulla xx

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 05-Jan-2024

Gracias, Ulla, te lo agradezco mucho.

Besitos y abrazos

Marival

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

You have painted a vivid image and strongly felt emotions with words. Your talent shines through with this poem. The poem is beautiful as is th artwork which makes for a perfect presentation.

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 05-Jan-2024

Most people didn't get it...c'est la vie

Thank you very much, my friend. Have a wonderful weekend.

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Comment from Rosemary Everson1

Excellent

Your painting of the picture is said in the poem and images. Very lovely romantic poem. I love to write but somehow, they always put me into a battle of competition. I'm not writing for that reason, are you?

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 05-Jan-2024

I don't compare my writing to anyone... what a waste of time. I barely have enough to write poems, manage my 3 clubs, add graphic art, and review.

Most people didn't get it...c'est la vie

Thank you very much, my friend. Have a wonderful weekend.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

A lovely suite of Tankas, Gypsy. As your notes say, the verse is charged with emotion. The beauty of the presentation also supports a sympathetic feel to the words and flow. I enjoyed it.

Melissa

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 05-Jan-2024

Most people didn't get it...c'est la vie

Thank you very much, my friend. Have a wonderful weekend.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

for some reason i kept wanting to read it as "on the wings"
then again it could be just me lol

cool pic and great imagistic word choices

thank you for sharing
shelley :)

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 05-Jan-2024

Thank you for the edit. I have a hard time with prepositions.

Most people didn't get it...c'est la vie

Thank you very much, my friend. Have a wonderful weekend.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from GWHARGIS

Excellent

I felt like this was silken strips, sliding across each other and you think they will tangle and pull taut, but they keep moving. This was a beautiful poem. Loved the imagery through out. Gretchen

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 05-Jan-2024

Most people didn't get it...c'est la vie

Thank you very much, my friend. Have a wonderful weekend.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from Navada

Excellent

I enjoyed your potent use of imagery here to describe the intimacy of this union and your artwork accompanies it beautifully. I also like the variety of senses you employ here. Lovely writing! :)

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 05-Jan-2024

Most people didn't get it...c'est la vie

Thank you very much, my friend. Have a wonderful weekend.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from royowen

Excellent

Another excellent post with all your flair for the expression needed to expand and the proposal of this beautifully expression of some profundity, this is a lovely piece of work, well done, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 05-Jan-2024

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

Gypsy hugs

reply by royowen on 05-Jan-2024

A pleasure

Comment from Douglas Goff

Excellent

Nobody describes the beauty of love like you do, my friend.

The illustrative nature of your mind really is quite beautiful.

Thank you for sharing.
Douglas

 Comment Written 04-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 05-Jan-2024

Thank you, Douglas... you made my night. I appreciate your kind review.

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