Week Three 2023 - 2024
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Comment from LateBloomer
Hello Bicpen, our Lord is our eye in the sky. She sees and knows everything. I especially liked:
The Lord Jesus Christ the head of this house
the unseen guest at every meal
(We'll soon be having dinner. I will look for him as he blesses our food.)
Great photo choice. I will how you write about communication in your poem. Well done. A pleasure to read. Keep the blue waters flowing.
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2024
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Hello Bicpen, our Lord is our eye in the sky. She sees and knows everything. I especially liked:
The Lord Jesus Christ the head of this house
the unseen guest at every meal
(We'll soon be having dinner. I will look for him as he blesses our food.)
Great photo choice. I will how you write about communication in your poem. Well done. A pleasure to read. Keep the blue waters flowing.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2024
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Excellent glad you can appreciate ... I liked writing this one.
Comment from Lea Tonin1
Very well done in a very unique perspective to Anna awesomely relevant subject we are getting away from the fundamentals of who are meant to be with all this technology no one even gets up anymore. A wonderful spiritual poem that points out something very real and needs to be said today so very well done I see no issues with grammar esthetic sentence structure or subject matter I think it's a great entry and I wish you best of luck and hope all you wish for comes in 2024 have a great day!
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2024
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Very well done in a very unique perspective to Anna awesomely relevant subject we are getting away from the fundamentals of who are meant to be with all this technology no one even gets up anymore. A wonderful spiritual poem that points out something very real and needs to be said today so very well done I see no issues with grammar esthetic sentence structure or subject matter I think it's a great entry and I wish you best of luck and hope all you wish for comes in 2024 have a great day!
Comment Written 05-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2024
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Excellent much appreciate the input into all the technicalities I always need someone to rip it up if it needs to be ... the old paths are true today we have internet telecommunications and all manner of electronics to entertain why ever happened to the quiet mind ... lol.
Comment from Navada
This is an interesting reflection on the nature of telecommunications. Like all powerful things, it's a good servant but a bad master. It enables great things to happen and also facilitates terrible things at the same time. Thanks for the share.
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2024
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This is an interesting reflection on the nature of telecommunications. Like all powerful things, it's a good servant but a bad master. It enables great things to happen and also facilitates terrible things at the same time. Thanks for the share.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2024
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Anytime my friend I like mine on the music channels seems safe enough though I'm not sure what the thought police would think ... !
Comment from Janis M.
This one is quite interesting! It made me think of Siri and Alexa always listening (the disease of AI and social media) but God is always listening and watching as well. Big brother and Big Father...
The last line too especially asking if you are listening is very strong in its message. God has communicated to us with the Bible and the Spirit if only we would listen to Him instead of our devices
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2024
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This one is quite interesting! It made me think of Siri and Alexa always listening (the disease of AI and social media) but God is always listening and watching as well. Big brother and Big Father...
The last line too especially asking if you are listening is very strong in its message. God has communicated to us with the Bible and the Spirit if only we would listen to Him instead of our devices
Comment Written 05-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2024
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Excellent maybe you could use your elephants ... lol.
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My elephants hEAR everything
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Excellent hopefully your memory will be the same ... lol.
Comment from T.A. Walk
Wonderful piece, thank you for sharing!
It's reassuring to know that he is always there to listen. Regardless of the situation, no judgment or reciprocation is ever delivered. Just acceptance and forgiveness.
I appreciate you, thank you.
Keep writing!!
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2024
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Wonderful piece, thank you for sharing!
It's reassuring to know that he is always there to listen. Regardless of the situation, no judgment or reciprocation is ever delivered. Just acceptance and forgiveness.
I appreciate you, thank you.
Keep writing!!
Comment Written 05-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2024
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Excellent glad you enjoyed the read
