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5 total reviews
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
This is excellent work. Your presentation is very good. You use expressive words and colorful imagery that will draw in readers. You seem to have chosen the perfect model for your own memeories. I enjoyed reviewing this.
Best wishes
Alex
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2024
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This is excellent work. Your presentation is very good. You use expressive words and colorful imagery that will draw in readers. You seem to have chosen the perfect model for your own memeories. I enjoyed reviewing this.
Best wishes
Alex
Comment Written 03-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2024
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Thank you Alexandra Treovato so much for your wonderful review and those shining stars.
Comment from damommy
Those were the days when we didn't worry about being kidnapped or shot. I grew up in the late 40s and early 50s. I wish every child had the childhood I had. Sounds like you did.
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2024
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Those were the days when we didn't worry about being kidnapped or shot. I grew up in the late 40s and early 50s. I wish every child had the childhood I had. Sounds like you did.
Comment Written 02-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2024
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Thank you damommy. I sounds like we did.
Comment from Yusita
This was an excellent poem and a pleasure to read. It brought back good memories of my own childhood and evoked feelings of nostalgia and melancholy through each well-thought out line and well-written verse.
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2024
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This was an excellent poem and a pleasure to read. It brought back good memories of my own childhood and evoked feelings of nostalgia and melancholy through each well-thought out line and well-written verse.
Comment Written 02-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2024
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Thank you, Yusita. I and pleased that my poem resonated with you so well. Thank you for your review and comments.
Comment from tfawcus
It's so good to see some substantial and well-crafted poems on site again, Tom.
You've given a fresh slant to a subject often in the forefront of the minds of those of a certain age. Bring back the good old days!
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2024
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It's so good to see some substantial and well-crafted poems on site again, Tom.
You've given a fresh slant to a subject often in the forefront of the minds of those of a certain age. Bring back the good old days!
Comment Written 01-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2024
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Thank you Tony. I am most pleased with your review and the stars.
Comment from patcelaw
I enjoyed your poem very much. It was well written, and it flows smoothly when it is read aloud. I wish you the very best for the new year and may all of your writing be as great is the one you have just presented us with. Patricia.
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2024
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I enjoyed your poem very much. It was well written, and it flows smoothly when it is read aloud. I wish you the very best for the new year and may all of your writing be as great is the one you have just presented us with. Patricia.
Comment Written 01-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2024
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Thank you Patricia.
