Comment from Mustang Patty

Excellent

Hi there!
What a wonderful way to give writers inspiration! Your contest entry fits the rules and reads wonderfully.
Good luck in the contest, and Happy New Year!
~MP~

 Comment Written 31-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 31-Dec-2023

Thank you and the same to you too!

Comment from Pam Lonsdale

Excellent

Good advice to writers - just keep plugging away and it will eventually come! I like the message of your poem and you appear to have met the technical requirements of syllables; I personally love the Joseph's Star poem. If I have one suggestion, it would be to make the lines look more like a star, as the stanzas really don't. It's hard to do, and may require the use of other words to get it to take on that "star form".

Good luck in the contest.

xo
Pam

 Comment Written 30-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 30-Dec-2023

Thank you!

Comment from Tom Horonzy

Excellent

... and so it was written and so it was done. Adrian wife of Rocky Balboa) tells me you have done a "Joseph" and done so well.
I had thought to be in the Twilight Zone since activity herein FS has been slow to develop like storms in the Sargasso Sea.
Good luck

 Comment Written 29-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 29-Dec-2023

Thank you so much!

Comment from Julie Helms

Excellent

I might just hang this on my wall. It speaks to my insecurities about not having anything worthwhile to say. Excellent affirmations for the writer! Thanks for sharing :-)
Julie

 Comment Written 28-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 28-Dec-2023

Thank you!

Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

A triple Joseph's Star! How lovely this is and true to form. The writing theme is always pleasing. Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest.
Sally :))

 Comment Written 28-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 28-Dec-2023

Thank you so much!