In A Poetry Loop
a loop poem about poetry & connections2 total reviews
Comment from tfawcus
Loop poems can sometimes be disjointed and somewhat forced, but not this one. The repeated words fall seamlessly into place without impeding the flow or the action. Very nicely done.
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Loop poems can sometimes be disjointed and somewhat forced, but not this one. The repeated words fall seamlessly into place without impeding the flow or the action. Very nicely done.
Comment Written 27-Dec-2023
Comment from Julie Helms
Lovely poem! What you are writing about is exactly what I am searching for. It's even written in my bio. I struggle with creativity and I'm tired of looking under rocks for it, and want it to flow through my brain like a river. A train would work too! Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest. Julie
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Lovely poem! What you are writing about is exactly what I am searching for. It's even written in my bio. I struggle with creativity and I'm tired of looking under rocks for it, and want it to flow through my brain like a river. A train would work too! Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest. Julie
Comment Written 27-Dec-2023
