Comment from Janis M.

Excellent

Your author notes are very insightful and helpful to understanding what your process was. One thing to note for Haikus is that if you want to get really traditional with them, they are written with out any capitalization or punctuation, and they generally do not have a title. (Unfortunately this site forced you to place a title) but most of the time, these poems are as minimalist as it gets.

Of course most people won't make comment on it or note it, but I always feel like it's helpful to mention it because some people do want to get as close as possible to true form

 Comment Written 26-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 26-Dec-2023

Thank you for your insight. I haven't been on the site for a while, so it is good to be back.

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

This is absolutely beautiful and I enjoyed your presentation very much. I also enjoyed your notes. It brings the light while you were inspired to write this particular work. May you have a very happy new year. Pat

 Comment Written 26-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 26-Dec-2023

Thank you so very much! I appreciate your review.