Comment from dovemarie

Exceptional

HI Gypsy, Great pictures of the sun over the waves and shining over the water. This haiku is haunting, it reminds me of two lovers coming together, with the "world between" them. Dove

 Comment Written 26-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 26-Dec-2023

Thank you very much, Dove. What a pretty name (*=*)
I appreciate the exceptional six stars review and kind words. Have a lovely day,

gypsy hugs

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

I like the idea of the sky and sea kissing on the horizon. Of course, it could be a metaphor for a couple who live worlds apart and never really get together. There's a constellation with a similar story. Loved the entire presentation.

 Comment Written 26-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 26-Dec-2023

Thank you very much, Barbara.

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Comment from Lisasview

Excellent

You really do say it all dear Gypsy in so few words!
Love the image and the color you chose ... so perfect
Happy day after Christmas...
Lisa getting ready for my knee recon January 3

 Comment Written 26-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 26-Dec-2023

I will pray for a quick recovery. Thank you, Lisa.

gypsy hugs

reply by Lisasview on 27-Dec-2023

Thank you so myc Gypsy... I do appreciate it.
Lisa

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

It feels like the sea and sky are are metaphor for lovers who are a "world apart". They can never be together long but they can hope to meet briefly at the horizon and accept that's the way it has to be.

 Comment Written 25-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 26-Dec-2023

Yes, that's true. Thank you, big sis.

Love
Marival

Comment from aryr

Excellent

This was truly a wonderful haiku, Gypsy. I loved the title of the "Sea and Sky". The picture was wonderful in that the 'sea and sky', it separated the two of them. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!

 Comment Written 25-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 26-Dec-2023

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

Gypsy hugs

reply by aryr on 26-Dec-2023

You are so very welcome, Gypsy.

Comment from Jumbo J

Excellent

Hi MariVal,
what a magic thought this Haiku allows my mind to take... a kiss between worlds. Mmmmmm(((((((()))))))).

It's so romantic in nature... and the images couple so wonderfully with the words. I can almost taste the salty taste upon my lips.

So beautiful! Loved it!

With our thoughts we create...
the line between reality.

Warmest regards,
James.

Ps. Hope you are having a loving Christmas day with your family my dear sweet friend.

 Comment Written 25-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 26-Dec-2023

Yes, I'm tucked in bed now. We had a wonderful Christmas. It was so much fun to watch Atticus open presents. Micaela's husband is the best cook I know. He made a delicious dinner and desert. I wrote a little but I mostly hang out with my daughter watching B movies.

I don't know if I told you, micaela is my youngest daughter, the one I live with, along with her husband and son. She is a wonderful daughter.

How was your Christmas with Jade? I hope it was fantastic.

Con cariño

Marival

reply by Jumbo J on 26-Dec-2023

Oh yes, watching your grandson Articus opening presents paints a magic picture... how wonderful!
Micaela's on a winner there, a husband that cooks... and what he's good at it! I'm so truly glad you have this close relationship with this part of your family... it sounds beautiful. I guess it all depended on what these 'B's' were, Hmmmmm?
Only one thing left... always believe and never sell yourself short!

Eres la 'Reina Lobo Gitana' brillando en un increíble tono azul oscuro!

We have a quiet Christmas and have Jade's older sister over for lunch... been doing that for ten years or so... I guess when you don't have children around, the magic dies that little bit?
But quiet is good... we made some plates of food for a few of the older-stay-at-home folk we know and delivered them to their door. I'd love to do that on a larger scale one day to include all those around me who may be living on their own, or who are by themselves on Christmas... yes, that would be something that would make me real happy!

Comment from GWHARGIS

Excellent

I liked the double meaning I got in this poem. First it was physical difference. He is far away maybe a different country. Then it was the thought of spiritual realm. He or she has passed n yet the connection was still there. Beautifully written. Gretchen

 Comment Written 25-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 26-Dec-2023

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

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Comment from Mark D. R.

Excellent

Gypsy,

Fantastic illustrations that you paired with your poem.

Suggested edits you might consider:

kiss on? kiss at?

world lives between them

Mark

 Comment Written 25-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 26-Dec-2023

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Good suggestion:)

Merry Christmas

Gypsy hugs

Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

first, you have random question marks lol

anyway, cool haiku
i like the world between sea and sky described as horizontal
never thought of it that way lol
nice imagery and smooth flow

thank you for sharing
shelley :)

 Comment Written 25-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 25-Dec-2023

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. I fixed it :)

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Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

This is beautifully worded, and it's constructed in a very lovely manner. I appreciate so much your work because it is always so beautiful. May you have a very happy and prosperous new year.

 Comment Written 25-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 26-Dec-2023

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

Gypsy hugs