Comment from Daylily

Excellent

You have creatively described a place of business that holds more that candles...it offers a provocative ambiance which entices customers to enter in and delightfully explore available waxy wares. Lovely!

 Comment Written 28-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 28-Dec-2023

Excellent ... thank you !

Comment from Yusita

Excellent

I love this! You wrote about an uncommon theme in a beautiful and graceful manner that keeps the reader engrossed. You speak of candles so beautifully! And I can see and smell them so well just by reading this. Great work!

 Comment Written 28-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 28-Dec-2023

Excellent ... don't let the light go out !

Comment from Douglas Goff

Excellent

Well done! I have never seen an ode to a favorite candle store. This was well thought out.

I also love that picture. Very elegant.

Nice work here.
Douglas

 Comment Written 28-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 28-Dec-2023

Excellent ... many thanks glad you liked.

Comment from Julie Helms

Excellent

What a delightful poem! I love stories told from an unusual POV. It's fun to have to guess as you go along who is being spoken of, until it's clarified at the end. I really enjoyed this, thanks!

 Comment Written 26-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 27-Dec-2023

Thank you glad you enjoyed I like writing this one.

Comment from Mia Twysted

Excellent

This piece makes me feel like I need to set my alarm so I can be up and beat the crowd to be there when the doors open. The vivid descriptions help me see the space as if it were laid out before me.

 Comment Written 26-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 27-Dec-2023

Up bright and early serve you right for burning the candle at both ends.