Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

I have a feeling that at least once in our lived each of us have had a secret crush on somebody. I also be at one time we've been the secret crush of somebody. I enjoyed reading this mysterious poem and the presentation.

 Comment Written 23-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 24-Dec-2023

Thank you very much for your kind review. Happy holidays!

Gypsy hugs

Comment from aryr

Excellent

Greepy, say it isn't so, Gypsy. This was a wonderful free verse with great pictures. Your words of the free verse were just what I ordered. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!

 Comment Written 22-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 22-Dec-2023

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

Gypsy hugs

reply by aryr on 24-Dec-2023

Most welcome, Gypsy.

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

It sounds like the narrator has quite the crush on someone. But it's hard to have a relationship from the shadows because once you really get to the other person, all those magical feelings could disappear.

 Comment Written 22-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 22-Dec-2023

Yes, that is right. Thank you, big sister. I hope you have a wonderful weekend and Christmas day.

love,
marival

Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

secret crush? lol
creepy or not, this free verse has great mysterious and thought=provoking imagery
"you take my breath away
and the rest of the world disappears
as i yearn for your hello..."
for some reason i really liked those lines lol

thank you for sharing
shelley :)

 Comment Written 22-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 22-Dec-2023

Thank you very much, I hope you have a wonderful weekend and Christmas Day!

gypsy hugs