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Viewing comments for Chapter 50 "bandaged in words unspoken"keep your hope alive....
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
When we rely only on our inner thoughts, we suffer in silence and your 34 syllables for the contest has captured those moments here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2023
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When we rely only on our inner thoughts, we suffer in silence and your 34 syllables for the contest has captured those moments here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 23-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2023
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thank you dolly 😊
Comment from Daylily
This is a heartfelt entry in the contest. The silent words spoken between the lines are coming through to readers just as clearly as those that are written visually. -- Being able to achieve this is a superlative gift of talent.
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2023
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This is a heartfelt entry in the contest. The silent words spoken between the lines are coming through to readers just as clearly as those that are written visually. -- Being able to achieve this is a superlative gift of talent.
Comment Written 22-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2023
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cool! thank you lily 😊
Comment from Ken Brody
Within the constraints of the style, this does well. The images of broken mind, lost dreams and windows to my soul are redeemed by the words unspoken.
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reply by the author on 22-Dec-2023
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Within the constraints of the style, this does well. The images of broken mind, lost dreams and windows to my soul are redeemed by the words unspoken.
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Comment Written 22-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2023
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thank you ken. may i ask why the 3 and if there's anything you can suggest to make it better? 🤔😊
Comment from Julie Helms
I love love love the imagery in the 3rd stanza. And your photo went along with that one! Broken, scarred, splattered--all such good visceral descriptions. Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2023
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I love love love the imagery in the 3rd stanza. And your photo went along with that one! Broken, scarred, splattered--all such good visceral descriptions. Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 22-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2023
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hehe thank you julia 😊
Comment from JSD
Excellent metaphor employed here and your language choice is powerful and effective. Great response to the prompt. Good luck in the competition with this.
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2023
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Excellent metaphor employed here and your language choice is powerful and effective. Great response to the prompt. Good luck in the competition with this.
Comment Written 22-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2023
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thank you jsd 😊
Comment from papa55mike
Sometimes, talking to our heart is the only way to heal, but always pray. I Love this form of poetry. What a wonderfully written poem. Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and Merry Christmas!
mike
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2023
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Sometimes, talking to our heart is the only way to heal, but always pray. I Love this form of poetry. What a wonderfully written poem. Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and Merry Christmas!
mike
Comment Written 22-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2023
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you too! thank you mike 😊
Comment from Yusita
Okay, this is a solid and excellent entry for the contest. What profound words that speak volumes. Great imagery also. I particularly loved the part that said: "The windows to my soul splattered with icy rain." The ending words were also epic. Lovely work.
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reply by the author on 22-Dec-2023
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Okay, this is a solid and excellent entry for the contest. What profound words that speak volumes. Great imagery also. I particularly loved the part that said: "The windows to my soul splattered with icy rain." The ending words were also epic. Lovely work.
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Comment Written 22-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2023
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cool! thank you yusita 😊
