Comment from aryr

Excellent

Good luck wishes regarding the contest entry, Gypsy. This was a wonderful haiku. This was appropriately titled- Autumn Winds. Your words were amazingly appropriately- building fire, sweeping kindle and fallen leaves. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!

 Comment Written 20-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 20-Dec-2023

Thank you very much for your review and kind words. Good night.

Gypsy hugs

reply by aryr on 21-Dec-2023

You are very welcome, Gypsy.

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

Here in Texas, we still have colored leaves on our trees. Actually, this year they've been prettier than they have ever been. Thank you for sharing this lovely poem and presentation with us.

 Comment Written 20-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 20-Dec-2023

Thank you very much for your review and kind words. Good night.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

as long as that fire is well contained lol!

great autumn haiku
love the sweeping of leaves...
nice flow and imagery

thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest
shelley :)

 Comment Written 20-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 20-Dec-2023

Thank you very much for your review and kind words. Good night.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

I'm smiling as I can't help but see "Kindle Fire" in your poem. Oh well. Perhaps others in a less techy world wouldn't notice. Lovely poem with the fun word play!

 Comment Written 20-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 20-Dec-2023

I have a kindle fire and I missed it! (*×*)

Would branches be better?

Thank you very much, big sister.

Love

Marival

reply by lyenochka on 20-Dec-2023

No, I like it!

Comment from Jasmine Girl

Excellent

This poem really looks like a shape and color of the fire. I like the fierceness of the poem that was stirred up by the wind. It's a lot like the Spanish character.

Well done.

 Comment Written 19-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 20-Dec-2023

Thank you very much for your review and kind words. Good night.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from jmdg1954

Excellent

It wasn't long ago when the fallen leaves were blowing across my deck. With sufficient gusts of wind, the leaves would be followed by the kindling of twigs.

I enjoy the change of seasons even though it gives me more clean up work in my yard!

Nicely composed.

John

 Comment Written 19-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 20-Dec-2023

Thank you very much for your review and kind words. Good night.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from GWHARGIS

Excellent

I love fall or autumn. I love the cozy feelings and colors that are associated with it. This poem captured that coziness. I could see the kindling and the fire glowing in the night. Beautifully written. Gretchen

 Comment Written 19-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 19-Dec-2023

Thank you very much Gretchen. I appreciate the kind review.

Gypsy hugs