Comment from Navada

Excellent

Thanks for sharing this - it's a happy exploration of things that we associate with Christmas at this time of year. There are a few typos to fix in places, including the description at the top. Good luck for the contest.

 Comment Written 19-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 19-Dec-2023

Hi : )
Can you explain where the typos are ? Thanks

reply by Navada on 19-Dec-2023

You're allowed it
Capitalisation - Father Christmas, Mrs Claus (no e)

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

This is a very nice Christmas poem that you written, and I wish you the very best in the contest have a very merry Christmas and happy and prosperous new year.

 Comment Written 18-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 18-Dec-2023

Thank you