2023 Gypsy's Free Verse
Viewing comments for Chapter 49 "At the End of the World".
6 total reviews
Comment from GWHARGIS
All things that may come to pass but not necessarily in that order. The love and need pulsate from this poem. The imagery was dramatic as opposed to the want and need of the subject. Gretchen
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2023
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All things that may come to pass but not necessarily in that order. The love and need pulsate from this poem. The imagery was dramatic as opposed to the want and need of the subject. Gretchen
Comment Written 18-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2023
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Us, Spanish poets, are very dramatic (*<>*) lol
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from barbara.wilkey
The only love I know that is that strong and unconditional is God's love for us. But, I do know that your presentation is absolutely gorgeous, again. Thank you for sharing it with us.
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2023
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The only love I know that is that strong and unconditional is God's love for us. But, I do know that your presentation is absolutely gorgeous, again. Thank you for sharing it with us.
Comment Written 17-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
That is a very determined love. There are very few humans that can love that deeply. I only know that is the kind of love that God loves us and He is always near.
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2023
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That is a very determined love. There are very few humans that can love that deeply. I only know that is the kind of love that God loves us and He is always near.
Comment Written 17-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2023
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Thank you very much, big sister. God will love us beyond the end of our physical life. I was thinking of love in a very dramatic way.
Thank you, big sister, I appreciate your kind review and insightful feedback.
Love
MariVal
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Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Your lovely free verse evolves seamlessly down the page in this expression of eternal, unassailable love, complemented by a very sensual image. Thanks for sharing, Gypsy. Debbie
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2023
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Your lovely free verse evolves seamlessly down the page in this expression of eternal, unassailable love, complemented by a very sensual image. Thanks for sharing, Gypsy. Debbie
Comment Written 16-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from shelley kaye
heartfelt, romantic, and sweet
great imagery and smooth flow of free love
nice!
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
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reply by the author on 17-Dec-2023
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heartfelt, romantic, and sweet
great imagery and smooth flow of free love
nice!
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
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Comment Written 16-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from aryr
This was the best of the best, Gypsy. I loved the picture. It was true to a point, this free verse, in the first paragraph 'one day' you promised the end of the world. In the second paragraph 'one night' you addressed the night of scattering one's ashes. In the third paragraph you completed the flame of our love will never die. Great job. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2023
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This was the best of the best, Gypsy. I loved the picture. It was true to a point, this free verse, in the first paragraph 'one day' you promised the end of the world. In the second paragraph 'one night' you addressed the night of scattering one's ashes. In the third paragraph you completed the flame of our love will never die. Great job. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
Comment Written 16-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Blessed be.
Gypsy hugs
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Most welcome, Gypsy.
