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2023 Gypsy's Free Verse

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Comment from GWHARGIS
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All things that may come to pass but not necessarily in that order. The love and need pulsate from this poem. The imagery was dramatic as opposed to the want and need of the subject. Gretchen

 Comment Written 18-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 18-Dec-2023
    Us, Spanish poets, are very dramatic (*<>*) lol

    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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The only love I know that is that strong and unconditional is God's love for us. But, I do know that your presentation is absolutely gorgeous, again. Thank you for sharing it with us.

 Comment Written 17-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 17-Dec-2023
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
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That is a very determined love. There are very few humans that can love that deeply. I only know that is the kind of love that God loves us and He is always near.

 Comment Written 17-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 17-Dec-2023
    Thank you very much, big sister. God will love us beyond the end of our physical life. I was thinking of love in a very dramatic way.

    Thank you, big sister, I appreciate your kind review and insightful feedback.

    Love

    MariVal
reply by lyenochka on 17-Dec-2023
    💖💖
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
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Your lovely free verse evolves seamlessly down the page in this expression of eternal, unassailable love, complemented by a very sensual image. Thanks for sharing, Gypsy. Debbie

 Comment Written 16-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 17-Dec-2023
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from shelley kaye
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heartfelt, romantic, and sweet
great imagery and smooth flow of free love
nice!
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
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 Comment Written 16-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 17-Dec-2023
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from aryr
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This was the best of the best, Gypsy. I loved the picture. It was true to a point, this free verse, in the first paragraph 'one day' you promised the end of the world. In the second paragraph 'one night' you addressed the night of scattering one's ashes. In the third paragraph you completed the flame of our love will never die. Great job. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!

 Comment Written 16-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 17-Dec-2023
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Blessed be.

    Gypsy hugs
reply by aryr on 17-Dec-2023
    Most welcome, Gypsy.