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The Saga of Procrastination

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Comment from Wayne Fowler
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Hah! Hilarious!
What a terrible experience!
"Hey Bud, gimme yer phone for a minute. (So you can look and call his wife!)
Rest assured not everyone shares the same. I'm living proof. (Remember to ask me what I'm talking about in a few days.) I'll tell you then why I had to wait.
Best wishes - really! (smiley face here)

 Comment Written 22-Dec-2023

Comment from Austin Yu
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Haha, this is funny Iza. Dating can sometimes be such a hassle, and just like you stated, there might be times when people fake their birthdays or age, and it comes off as a surprise. Nice writing!

 Comment Written 21-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 02-Jan-2024
    This was a real story, and I am really scare to be on any site now.
Comment from JSD
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Another spirited and amusing rant, Iza. I've never tired any of these things. I think real life and real interactions give you many more opportunities and they are real, as long as not too befuddled by alcohol! Happy Christmas to you and better luck in 2024.

 Comment Written 20-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 21-Dec-2023
    Well, I am done:) when I was young these dating apps were better, now it's lots of carp on all of them, and the design become worse. Thank you for reading my little rant:)
Comment from Navada
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I like this scathing takedown of dating apps. As far as I'm concerned, they're all scams and I wouldn't ever touch one with a barge pole! Thanks for the share.

 Comment Written 19-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 21-Dec-2023
    You are so right they are all scam and own by the same company:) so their algorithm is the same,
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Thank you for sharing this with us. You're correct people aren't who they say they are on FaceBook of really any other Internet source. I'm beginning to think the only place to meet people is in the grocery store or maybe church. But they probably lie there too.

 Comment Written 16-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 19-Dec-2023
    Yup they do:) so I better just focus on making money and travelling:)
Comment from lancellot
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You have a topic that I think may would find interesting. The thing is, your script is lacking in form and formatting. Some revisions needed, even for a one-person monologue.

note

mirror: "That's it! No more attempted murder

-This marks the beginning of dialogue, but there isn't a closing quite mark for where it ends.

 Comment Written 15-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 19-Dec-2023
    Hi thank you so much for your sincerity, and you are right sometimes I'm just drop the bomb and go:)
Comment from lyenochka
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Lol. You have convinced me completely that those apps are dangerous. In the olden days, your parents suggested a partner. Later, it was friends, and then either the church or a bar. But all these situations involved real people and no one hiding behind doctored pictures!

 Comment Written 15-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 19-Dec-2023
    You are so right, so i will just let it g o:)