Naughty Bunnies
3rd Place Finish9 total reviews
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
A bit too cute for my taste , but well done just the same. I don't think animals should be caged for our viewing pleasure. Humans don't like it, why would animals? My view only. You wrote well. Karen
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2023
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A bit too cute for my taste , but well done just the same. I don't think animals should be caged for our viewing pleasure. Humans don't like it, why would animals? My view only. You wrote well. Karen
Comment Written 15-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2023
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This rabbit was behind a fence at my job. I was actually the one in a cage. I guess the rabbit had the last laugh.
My goal here was to take take on the cat and dog fluff pieces head on and de throne them. FAIL. Cats and dogs reign supreme on FS.
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Either free the bunnies or serve them up! With a nice gravy. :-)
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Ha!
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:-)
Comment from Andrea Kepple
I like how imaginative your poem is. I like the picture you paired with the poem which helps to set the tone and echo the poem's message. I like the rhythms you set up in the poem through the choices of words you used.
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2023
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I like how imaginative your poem is. I like the picture you paired with the poem which helps to set the tone and echo the poem's message. I like the rhythms you set up in the poem through the choices of words you used.
Comment Written 15-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2023
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Thank you! I shall engage cat and dog poems with cute bunny poems. Game on!
Comment from Bill Schott
This twenty-five-word poem, Naughty Bunnies, has the proper word count and points out the cruel realities involved when tracking the imfamous "bunnees naughtique".
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2023
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This twenty-five-word poem, Naughty Bunnies, has the proper word count and points out the cruel realities involved when tracking the imfamous "bunnees naughtique".
Comment Written 15-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2023
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Ha! You are such a witty character, Bill.
Absolutely love your reviews!
Comment from Navada
One wonders what crimes rabbits could commit, other than being guilty of perennial cuteness. I guess escaping lawful custody is the one that springs to mind! Thanks for the share! :)
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2023
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One wonders what crimes rabbits could commit, other than being guilty of perennial cuteness. I guess escaping lawful custody is the one that springs to mind! Thanks for the share! :)
Comment Written 14-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2023
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Stealing carrots. They are notorious garden pirates. The best tool to take down all these dog and cat pieces? Cute bunnies. Muhahahahah
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Aha! I like it! :)
Comment from Daylily
This is definitely a hopping good posting.
That bandit bunny should beware...the bars of justice can close in a jiffy behind a bad bunny. Better be careful!
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2023
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This is definitely a hopping good posting.
That bandit bunny should beware...the bars of justice can close in a jiffy behind a bad bunny. Better be careful!
Comment Written 14-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2023
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Ha! This did turn out darn cute. We shall see f it can de throne cats and dogs.
Comment from patcelaw
This is a very nice poem that you have written for the contest I wish you the very best in the contest your word count is right on it's 25 words indeed. May you have a merry, merry Christmas and a happy and prosperous new year. Patricia
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2023
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This is a very nice poem that you have written for the contest I wish you the very best in the contest your word count is right on it's 25 words indeed. May you have a merry, merry Christmas and a happy and prosperous new year. Patricia
Comment Written 14-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2023
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Thank you! We shall see how it goes. Appreciate the holiday wishes. Merry Christmas to you!
Comment from angel123
I enjoyed reading your interesting poem. You chose an interesting topic and you followed the word count. Your artwork choice enhances your message. Thank you for sharing! Best wishes!
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2023
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I enjoyed reading your interesting poem. You chose an interesting topic and you followed the word count. Your artwork choice enhances your message. Thank you for sharing! Best wishes!
Comment Written 14-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2023
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Thank you. But can it beat cats and dogs. The world wants to know.
Comment from jim vecchio
Where's "Crusader Rabbit" when you need him? He'd get that bunny out! Or even, "Ricochet Rabbit!" Of course, a rabbit should be in a pen if he's cagey! If they don't remember they put him there, though, he'll be a forgotten cottontail!
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2023
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Where's "Crusader Rabbit" when you need him? He'd get that bunny out! Or even, "Ricochet Rabbit!" Of course, a rabbit should be in a pen if he's cagey! If they don't remember they put him there, though, he'll be a forgotten cottontail!
Comment Written 13-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2023
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Good thing they didn?t try to ?rabbit? from the police. (Oh no. Here we go again! Ha! )
Comment from Yusita
Love the light-heartedness and humor in this one! "Naughty fluffle captured"... and my favorite part was the ending--"red pawed" instead of red handed. Made me chuckle. Great job!
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2023
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Love the light-heartedness and humor in this one! "Naughty fluffle captured"... and my favorite part was the ending--"red pawed" instead of red handed. Made me chuckle. Great job!
Comment Written 13-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2023
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Thank you! I am taking on cats and dogs with a direct frontal assault of cute bunnies. Ha!
