Comment from Wendyanne

Excellent

Although your story is very funny I am also finding it quite educational and informative as you have mentioned I have not heard of before. Please keep on entertaining with your imaginative stories!

 Comment Written 11-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 11-Dec-2023

Thanks, Wendy. I'll do my best.

Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

This is a great story, Tom, and it could have been entered for a fantasy contest! It's got humour, great descriptive detail, all in a lovely imaginative package which I really enjoyed reading. I've no idea what nastification means but it doesn't really matter does it? An excellent ending as well. Keep up the writing, Tom! Debbie

 Comment Written 10-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 10-Dec-2023

In part 1 Tom says him and his girlfriend were "doing the nasty." Need I say more? I'm looking at contests right now. Thanks for the great review.

reply by Debbie D'Arcy on 10-Dec-2023

You should definitely enter with one of these stories if you can. I love this genre that you've found.

reply by the author on 10-Dec-2023

Alrteady done with Story Unlikely. Check them out,

reply by Debbie D'Arcy on 10-Dec-2023

Is that a contest brief? If so what's the date?

reply by the author on 10-Dec-2023

From now to Jan.31st 2024. You've got plenty of time.

Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill

Excellent

This was great. I haven't seen you before. You might enjoy my sci-fi story "Another day in Paradise."

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 Comment Written 09-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 09-Dec-2023

Thank you. I'll check it out.

reply by Karen Cherry Threadgill on 09-Dec-2023

Have a good weekend. :-)

Comment from JSD

Excellent

Great idea and I very much enjoyed the continuation of this. I'm glad you finished it off with such wit and clever humour. I really fancy one of those sandwiches!

 Comment Written 09-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 09-Dec-2023

And they were real and SOOO good. Thanks for reading. I'm glad you liked it.

Comment from Wayne Fowler

Excellent

Sir Francis Bacon.... mayhaps, mayhaps.
He bought his cup up and I di mine and clicked - (did?)
I'm pretty sure wine would not touch my writer's block, though in my case, writer's block is nothing more than a bad case of the lazies, or 'frakes' as it's called in the Arkansas Ozarks.
Best wishes.

 Comment Written 08-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 09-Dec-2023

Thanks, Wayne. I'm working on another.

Comment from Navada

Excellent

I love it! Once again, you combine a really interesting conversation with a fascinating historical figure with some 1980s (and early 1600s!) humour. It's a really fun combination. Whatever this magical portal is that you've stumbled across, I think it is the gift that keeps on giving. I look forward to more Dinerviews!

 Comment Written 08-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 09-Dec-2023

Part 2 is out now and thanks for the kind review.

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

I very much enjoyed listening to this, and it kept me engaged the whole way through. I'm awed by your wording and your story. I wish you the very best with all of your writing. Have a very merry Christmas and a happy and prosperous new year. Patricia.

 Comment Written 08-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 09-Dec-2023

Oh, we always have a nice Christmas. Thanks for the nice review.

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

I very much enjoyed listening to this, and it kept me engaged the whole way through. I'm awed by your wording and your story. I wish you the very best with all of your writing. Have a very merry Christmas and a happy and prosperous new year. Patricia.

 Comment Written 08-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 09-Dec-2023

Thanks again.