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2023 Gypsy's Haiku

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Comment from aryr
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This was a beautiful haiku, Gypsy. The mention of 'snow kisses' was delightful. The trees were wonderful. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!

 Comment Written 06-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 06-Dec-2023
    Thank you very much Aryr. Blessed be.

    Gypsy hugs
reply by aryr on 07-Dec-2023
    You are so welcome, Gypsy.
Comment from GWHARGIS
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Yours is the second snow poem I've read this morning. It makes me smile because I'm so wanting a winter snow storm where I live. At most, we will get 2 to 4 inches but that tiny amount will shut us down for a couple of days. Thank you for sharing. Gretchen

 Comment Written 06-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 06-Dec-2023
    Thank you for taking the time to read and review my poem.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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I do miss snowflakes kisses. You are making me homesick for the Midwest and actual winter. GRR. Although, I'm not sure they have snow there yet, I do know it's cold. Hmm, maybe I need to rethink my problem, right now. Oh well, I really enjoyed your presentation and I appreciate you sharing it with us.

 Comment Written 06-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 06-Dec-2023
    We don't have snow in pasadena... a town near Los Angeles in southern California. We have to drive to the mountains. It's fun to drive to the snow for a day but I wouldn't want to live in cold weather all the time.

    Thank you very much, my friend. I always appreciate your kind reviews. May you have a wonderful day.

    Gypsy hugs
reply by barbara.wilkey on 06-Dec-2023
    A few years back my husband and I visited LA and stayed in a hotel in Pasadena.
Comment from shelley kaye
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it looks like you are lying in the snow making a snow angel looking up at the sky as another angel sends a kiss to you... cool image!

thank you for sharing
shelley :)

 Comment Written 06-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 06-Dec-2023
    Thank you very much, my friend. I always appreciate kind reviews. May you have a wonderful day.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from tfawcus
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I thought your satori line had great impact, Gypsy. As is usually the case with a haiku, it can make or break the poem. In this case, I think it makes it.
Another fine offering.

 Comment Written 06-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 06-Dec-2023
    Thank you very much, my friend. I always appreciate kind reviews. May you have a wonderful day.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from karenina
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Hmmm. My imagination is piqued! A metaphor? A sweet beginning the seed of live? Maybe both!

Tis the season for cold hearts to melt...why not here?



Karenina

 Comment Written 06-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 06-Dec-2023
    Thank you very much, little sister. I appreciate that you are taking the time to read and review so many of my poems and without a certificate. You are a true angel.

    Big hugs and love

    Marival
reply by karenina on 07-Dec-2023
    Poems are priceless. It's not about the payout!
Comment from lyenochka
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I like the idea of snowflakes being snow kisses from the winter sky. It's amazing how each snowflake is unique and it's fun when the flakes just land gently on you as you walk in the falling snow.

 Comment Written 06-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 06-Dec-2023
    Yes, I'm trying to conjure that moment when you feel snow on your face.

    Thank you very much , big sister. May God bless you.

    Love
    Marival
Comment from Yusita
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Snow kisses from the sky. I love this beautiful Haiku. I also like the picture you included. I can feel the snow kisses on my face just by looking at it and reading your piece.

 Comment Written 05-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 06-Dec-2023
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy hugs