Comment from Alison Greenwood

Excellent

This had a bit of a song like quality to it, and I really liked the illustration. I was a bit intrigued by some of the verses, and am sure there are more layers here than just eagles being better than these other birds. I'm not sure why any birds would make you bleed, I found that a bit confusing. But I liked the sing song rhythm.

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 30-Nov-2023

Well, let?s just say that a pigeon, for some reason wanted to try to hurt an eagle? I?m not sure why maybe he stole a kernel of corn I don?t know? for the sake of the story, let?s just pretend shall we? The pigeon would have a very hard time fighting the eagle. Des destroy fair easily. I?m not sure you why you got the metaphor for the rest of the poem, but could not see the metaphor for the blood. everything in the poem is a metaphor. How about that? People are not eagles I?m aware that birds don?t attack other birds can we just try to use our imagination. Lol 😂 😂

Comment from Daylily

Excellent

What is most important is to understand who you are and nurture yourself and your uniqueness. If someone makes you bleed, the best response is to fluff up your feathers and defy them by living a good and satisfying life.

Perseverance is a wonderful characteristic of noble people.

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 29-Nov-2023

And some poets too😁