Spectre
Viewing comments for Chapter 13 "The Bump"This is book two of a trilogy book 1 "Ghost"
12 total reviews
Comment from LJbutterfly
You have included many people in your story, which makes it interesting. except for a few school friends when you were staying in the woods, no one has really been a trustworthy friend. You are therefore, still searching and hoping for a sincere person who can be trusted. I hope B can be trusted. So far, you're a fighter. I hope you don't have to fight him.
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2023
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You have included many people in your story, which makes it interesting. except for a few school friends when you were staying in the woods, no one has really been a trustworthy friend. You are therefore, still searching and hoping for a sincere person who can be trusted. I hope B can be trusted. So far, you're a fighter. I hope you don't have to fight him.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2023
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You remain a faithful and fine friend to me for many, many years and still is to this day. The bright light of my life was his friendship and still have. Thank you for reading and you're kind of your kind comments especially. I hope you have the best night!
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Mrs. D. is a saint, right? She seems so caring and compassionate and nice. I hope we continue to like her (and not worry about her own health and well-being..)
And let's hope this boy is okay. Your willingness to be so trusting and hopeful is, I think, the facet of your personality that never gets old for me. A thousand times you get knocked down; a thousand-and-one you get up and say, "No, it's fine; I'm okay." Remarkable.
You'll want to do some editing of the conversational part, Sweetie. I'll email you the minor fix-ups. xo
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2023
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Mrs. D. is a saint, right? She seems so caring and compassionate and nice. I hope we continue to like her (and not worry about her own health and well-being..)
And let's hope this boy is okay. Your willingness to be so trusting and hopeful is, I think, the facet of your personality that never gets old for me. A thousand times you get knocked down; a thousand-and-one you get up and say, "No, it's fine; I'm okay." Remarkable.
You'll want to do some editing of the conversational part, Sweetie. I'll email you the minor fix-ups. xo
Comment Written 03-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2023
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Thank you, my friend. I appreciate that and you as always so happy. Have you part of my journey I appreciate the recommendations for edits too thank you! I'm glad you and your family are back to health again hope you don't sick again can't be any fun!
Comment from JSD
Great writing in all three parts as usual. The candle of hope for you flickers in my heart dear Lea. Looking forward to the next one. I hope you're keeping well. x
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2023
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Great writing in all three parts as usual. The candle of hope for you flickers in my heart dear Lea. Looking forward to the next one. I hope you're keeping well. x
Comment Written 01-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2023
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Thank you so much. I appreciate you so very much that you read along with me and offer your thoughts and your kind. You're waiting it's always an honor to receive thank you!
Comment from T B Botts
Hello Lea,
it seems so odd that fast food places would require experience, since they usually hire anyone who wants to work for minimum wage. I'm glad you kept trying to find work though. You brought up a good point, how can you get experience if you can't get hired? I'm glad you found a place to stay, but obviously, this isn't the best arrangement either. I'm sure it was uncomfortable for you, but I'm glad the lady is patient.
Have a blessed day gal.
Tom
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2023
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Hello Lea,
it seems so odd that fast food places would require experience, since they usually hire anyone who wants to work for minimum wage. I'm glad you kept trying to find work though. You brought up a good point, how can you get experience if you can't get hired? I'm glad you found a place to stay, but obviously, this isn't the best arrangement either. I'm sure it was uncomfortable for you, but I'm glad the lady is patient.
Have a blessed day gal.
Tom
Comment Written 30-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2023
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Oh yeah, many of them do hire without experience and I did get one. I'm kentucky fried chicken job. Got some free chicken and stuff out of the deal! Thank you so much again Tom I appreciate you. I really do. It's a broken record I know But it needs to be set again and again. Thank you again for your rating in your fine comments as well!
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Hey, you got some pretty good chicken out of the deal. I never liked the mashed potatoes, but the coleslaw was out of this world. At least you were fed, that's always nice.
Comment from Jacob1395
It is so frustrating when you're applying for jobs and they only want people with experience. There never seems to be many entry level roles being offered, I find. Another well told chapter Lea.
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2023
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It is so frustrating when you're applying for jobs and they only want people with experience. There never seems to be many entry level roles being offered, I find. Another well told chapter Lea.
Comment Written 30-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2023
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Thank you so much, Jacob. I seem to be keeping up with each other that's very cool. I appreciate having you hair and reading along And offering your thoughts. Thank you for your review and your kind rating have a great day!
Comment from CrystieCookie999
I liked reading this. The woman was the more generous of the two, it sounds like. I wonder if she is the type who would take in stray dogs or cats as well. Strong suggestion: change 'ya' to 'yeah' every time it occurs.
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2023
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I liked reading this. The woman was the more generous of the two, it sounds like. I wonder if she is the type who would take in stray dogs or cats as well. Strong suggestion: change 'ya' to 'yeah' every time it occurs.
Comment Written 30-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2023
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Yes absolutely right great suggestion thank you again! I so appreciate you reading along! Thanks again for your great suggestions! Thank you for your review and your kind rating too!
Comment from Jim Wile
Well, maybe things are looking up. It sure would be nice for a change. The Indian lady sure seems to like you even if the husband does not. That has to count for something. And "the collider" sounds like he might be a good guy too, but we'll see.
I hope for once you can catch a break, at least for a little while.
I'm also glad you'll be going through that box with your sister and maybe through your actions you'll finally see some justice done. That will certainly make it worth it. - Jim
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2023
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Well, maybe things are looking up. It sure would be nice for a change. The Indian lady sure seems to like you even if the husband does not. That has to count for something. And "the collider" sounds like he might be a good guy too, but we'll see.
I hope for once you can catch a break, at least for a little while.
I'm also glad you'll be going through that box with your sister and maybe through your actions you'll finally see some justice done. That will certainly make it worth it. - Jim
Comment Written 29-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2023
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Thank you, Jim, for your compassion and your empathy. I'm always happy to receive your reviews. Thank you so much and then for hanging in there with me. I am very pleased and honored I hope you have a great night!
Comment from EILEEN LAW
"She laughed,"
extra quotations around the above.
Other wise this is as usual expertly written - I sometimes also look down on the city - be it smog or fog both to me look like a cool place to hide. Like a big cold hug. Hmm Go figure - needing to hide because I never feel safe.
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2023
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"She laughed,"
extra quotations around the above.
Other wise this is as usual expertly written - I sometimes also look down on the city - be it smog or fog both to me look like a cool place to hide. Like a big cold hug. Hmm Go figure - needing to hide because I never feel safe.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2023
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Thank you!
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Yes, a good, promising period, perhaps, in which we can, at least, take a little breather, whilst, all the time, aware that your stability could be overturned in an instant, especially if there's no money coming in. I'm wondering who the baddies might now be. Thanks for sharing, Lea. Take care Debbie
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2023
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Yes, a good, promising period, perhaps, in which we can, at least, take a little breather, whilst, all the time, aware that your stability could be overturned in an instant, especially if there's no money coming in. I'm wondering who the baddies might now be. Thanks for sharing, Lea. Take care Debbie
Comment Written 29-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2023
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Sorry, Debbie, I'm a little bit behind. I was away for the weekend still. I still wanted to definitely say thank you again for your marvelous review and your fine ratings. When I wish you great tonight!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
It is hard not paying your way and sponging off others, but as long as you give this kind lady some money for your keep then you should be in the clear with the husband. And why not have some fun too. You are young and living in an adult world and you had no time to be a carefree child with no worries. You were robbed of your childhood and you should at least have fun as a teenager, another fine chapter Lea, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2023
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It is hard not paying your way and sponging off others, but as long as you give this kind lady some money for your keep then you should be in the clear with the husband. And why not have some fun too. You are young and living in an adult world and you had no time to be a carefree child with no worries. You were robbed of your childhood and you should at least have fun as a teenager, another fine chapter Lea, love Dolly x
Comment Written 29-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2023
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Thank you Dolly. I would appreciate you. Call me in having a reading offering me your thoughts. Great. Appreciate your rating and your fine review too I hope that your day is magnificent!
