That Golden Moment
On being entranced with nature36 total reviews
Comment from Wendy G
Beautiful photo and a lovely poem to accompany it, filled with luxurious imagery and a heart filled with praise. Well done Tina. I enjoyed it a lot.
Wendy
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2023
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Beautiful photo and a lovely poem to accompany it, filled with luxurious imagery and a heart filled with praise. Well done Tina. I enjoyed it a lot.
Wendy
Comment Written 19-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2023
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Thank you, Wendy. You summarized what I was trying to express, so well. I appreciate you!
Tina
Comment from John Ciarmello
This is beautiful, Tina!
Sunsets are a gift, as you say. In our busy lives, some don't even look up and take for granted the beauty.
I loved this! Best, JohnC
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2023
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This is beautiful, Tina!
Sunsets are a gift, as you say. In our busy lives, some don't even look up and take for granted the beauty.
I loved this! Best, JohnC
Comment Written 19-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2023
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Hmmm...I like your commentary that we don't look up enough. Gets me thinking about another poem. How easy to look up, yet we dont do it as much as we should. Thanks, John for the review and food fro thought!
Comment from jake cosmos aller
a moving poem about the glories of the natural world particularly the sunset which reveals nature is all of its glories. where were the pictures taken and where are you?
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2023
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a moving poem about the glories of the natural world particularly the sunset which reveals nature is all of its glories. where were the pictures taken and where are you?
Comment Written 19-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2023
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We are in Roanoke, Va and the picture is our house. We have tons of sunsets and mountains ! Theyre so refreshing:) Thank you for the review!
Tina
Comment from Boogienights
Amazing free verse, very descriptive. A wonderful entry for the no rules contest. The picture you chose is perfect for your poem. I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2023
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Amazing free verse, very descriptive. A wonderful entry for the no rules contest. The picture you chose is perfect for your poem. I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2023
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Aw, thanks so much! I missed being here. I will check out your page soon!
Tina
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Great to see you, Tina.
-A lovely photograph and nice presentation.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-The imagery creates a vivid word picture.
-You also make excellent use of
alliteration and internal rhyme, especially
in your repeated line.
-My other favorites are about the
"play of enamored art" and
"That most welcome joy, uninvited guest."
-An excellent concluding verse.
-Thanks for sharing this.
-Have a great day and week ahead.
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2023
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-Great to see you, Tina.
-A lovely photograph and nice presentation.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-The imagery creates a vivid word picture.
-You also make excellent use of
alliteration and internal rhyme, especially
in your repeated line.
-My other favorites are about the
"play of enamored art" and
"That most welcome joy, uninvited guest."
-An excellent concluding verse.
-Thanks for sharing this.
-Have a great day and week ahead.
Comment Written 19-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2023
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Thanks again, dear Pam!
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You are very welcome and deserving, Tina.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
God created that gorgeous sunset for your enjoyment and reminder that He is in charge. Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. I enjoyed reading and wish you luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2023
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God created that gorgeous sunset for your enjoyment and reminder that He is in charge. Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. I enjoyed reading and wish you luck with the contest.
Comment Written 19-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2023
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Thank you, Barbara! Yes, He is so good to us and He is definitely in charge, thank goodness:)
Tina
Comment from Goodadvicechan
Sunset is always beautiful. Such beauty clears your mind and drives away all the unhappiness of the day.
I am lucky that my building is facing the river. The sunset scenery is so beautiful.
Thank you for sharing your work with us. I totally enjoyed it.
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2023
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Sunset is always beautiful. Such beauty clears your mind and drives away all the unhappiness of the day.
I am lucky that my building is facing the river. The sunset scenery is so beautiful.
Thank you for sharing your work with us. I totally enjoyed it.
Comment Written 19-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2023
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You are so right about nature clearing the mind. I am glad you have a river to look at while at work!Thats my favorite place to write, in front of a window with nature to inspire me. Thanks for stopping by to review this!
Tina
Comment from Lea Tonin1
That's beautiful! I adore your picture too this is well written In the amazed part I can certainly relate to! I find your poem to be visually pleasing. It's also grammatically perfect and a beautiful gorgeous ode to God!
I see no issues with grammar sentence strucsubject matter. I think it's very well done and it's a fine entry. Thank you so much. Have a great day!
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2023
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That's beautiful! I adore your picture too this is well written In the amazed part I can certainly relate to! I find your poem to be visually pleasing. It's also grammatically perfect and a beautiful gorgeous ode to God!
I see no issues with grammar sentence strucsubject matter. I think it's very well done and it's a fine entry. Thank you so much. Have a great day!
Comment Written 19-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2023
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Thank you, Lea for a thorough review. It means a lot that you did so!
I hope you had a great day!
Tina
Comment from Wendyanne
This is a very well penned piece of poetry in which you exalt the beauty of a sunset. It is a most beautiful sight to see and you have described it very well. Beautiful imagery and great use of alliteration throughout this lovely poem. Good luck.
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2023
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This is a very well penned piece of poetry in which you exalt the beauty of a sunset. It is a most beautiful sight to see and you have described it very well. Beautiful imagery and great use of alliteration throughout this lovely poem. Good luck.
Comment Written 19-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2023
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Your review is lovely. Thanks for taking the time to read my poem:)
Tina
Comment from T.A. Walk
The rhythm and flow of this piece is wonderful.
I love the repetitive finish to the verses as it shows you're grateful at your bounty.
No critique to offer, great job.
Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2023
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The rhythm and flow of this piece is wonderful.
I love the repetitive finish to the verses as it shows you're grateful at your bounty.
No critique to offer, great job.
Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 19-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2023
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Thomas, thanks for letting me know the rhythm and flow were in sync. I appreciate your nice review!
Tina