Comment from w.j.debi

Excellent

I like the comparison of the magic wand and the pencil. There is power in that wonderful wood clutched between the fingers of a true magician of words. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 17-Nov-2023

Thank you very much, may you have a fabulous weekend.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

I really like the idea of poets using their writing to conjure new worlds. That's an interesting way to put it, but oh, so true. Once again, your presentation is perfect. Thank you.

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2023

Thank you very much, Barbara, have a wonderful day.

Your friend, Gypsy

Comment from Mark D. R.

Excellent

Gypsy,

Quite an engaging illustration for this Senryu poem!

I do like your connection with wand and pencil (and new and old). However, old has its specific meaning in your mind, but... I have no one syllable edit as its substitute.

Add a space before your long dash?

Mark

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2023

I like it the way it is but thank you for the suggestion.

Thank you very much, Mark, have a wonderful day.

Your friend, Gypsy

Comment from aryr

Excellent

This was a wonderful senryu /haiku, Gypsy. I liked the dual pictures because they showed it was special- I enjoyed the first picture because it was of the Sorcerer, that means something special to me, the other picture was of an earring, I think. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2023

Thank you very much, Aryr, have a wonderful day.

Your friend, Gypsy

Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell

Excellent

A beautiful poem, illustrated beautifully. I love the idea of the poet as one who can make words magic with any instrument at hand. You are a Senryu master.

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2023

Thank you very much, Verna, have a wonderful day.

Your friend, Gypsy

Comment from shelley kaye

Exceptional

this is so cool!
i love magic... new... old...
great imagery and smooth flow
and cool pics and colours, too

thank you for sharing
shelley :)
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 Comment Written 16-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2023

Thank you very much for the exceptional six-star review, Shelley, have a wonderful day.

Your friend, Gypsy

Comment from Chrissy710

Excellent

Love this Gypsy very clever word usage and says a lot
I wonder how many pencils we use in a lifetime of writing
Great Satori
Cheers Chris
150 characters Hmmmm

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2023

Thank you very much, Chrissy, have a wonderful day.

Your friend, Gypsy

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

So cool! And that picture shows a sorcerer poetess who really knows how to dress up and apply makeup!
I really liked the contrast of the "old" pencil conjuring up "new" worlds in her poetry!

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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2023

hehe .. I wish I could look like her. Thank you, Big Sister. May you have a wonderful day.

Love,
MariVal

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Love the sentiment here as no matter what age we are, we can always conjure some new words and bring them to life with a worn out pencil, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 15-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2023

Thank you very much for your exceptional review and kind words.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from Iza Deleanu

Exceptional

Wow so cute and etheric, another day another magic pass in the realm of poetry - magic wand - old pencil. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.

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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2023

Thank you very much for your exceptional six stars review and kind words.

Gypsy hugs