Duck and Gnat
A limerick2 total reviews
Comment from Iza Deleanu
I had a blast reading your poem "Missy Duck wore a long top hat
On top of the hat sat a gnat
The gnat was grumpy
The duck was dumpy
When suddenly it fell with a splat!" what a duck. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2023
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I had a blast reading your poem "Missy Duck wore a long top hat
On top of the hat sat a gnat
The gnat was grumpy
The duck was dumpy
When suddenly it fell with a splat!" what a duck. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2023
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Thank you for the six stars. I am happy you enjoyed the poem. Thank you for taking the time to read and review my work.
With kind regards
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I loved the humour here but the distinctive Limerick metre is missing and it could be because you are a few syllables short to achieve the melody, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2023
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I loved the humour here but the distinctive Limerick metre is missing and it could be because you are a few syllables short to achieve the melody, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 15-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2023
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I love limericks but have always struggled to get the metre right. Thanks for pointing it out. Thank you for taking the time.e to read and review my work.
With kind regards
