Comment from Mark Schardine

Excellent

This invitation causes a person to look forward to the meeting and enjoy each step along the way. Anyone would be happy to receive this invitation, and live as a good friend.

 Comment Written 17-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 17-Nov-2023

Thank you very much, may you have a fabulous weekend.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from aryr

Excellent

The picture was beautiful and so complete, this was a wonderful haiku, Gypsy. The words of your haiku were so enjoyable that they actually made sense-they were so colorful that they were great. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!

 Comment Written 15-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 15-Nov-2023

Thank you very much, Aryr.

I appreciate the excellent five stars review and kind words.

Gypsy hugs

reply by aryr on 15-Nov-2023

You are so very welcome, Gypsy.

Comment from GWHARGIS

Excellent

This imagery in this short piece was stunning. I love pictures of autumnal settings near bodies of water. The reflections are dazzling. This was a happy and open tone. Thanks for sharing. Gretchen

 Comment Written 14-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 15-Nov-2023

Thank you very much, Gretchen. (*÷*) I appreciate your kind review.

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Comment from Ulla

Excellent

I love this haiku, Marival, which just says it all. The artwork to go with it is outstanding as is the haiku..yes indeed the rich display of autumn is such an inspiration. Ulla xx

 Comment Written 14-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 14-Nov-2023

Thank you, Ulla. I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem..

Gypsy hugs

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

Thank you for sharing this beautiful presentation with us. I know I would love to meet you by the lake, and we could watch all the gorgeous colors and feel the cool breeze. I enjoyed the feeling.

 Comment Written 14-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 14-Nov-2023

Thank you, Barbara. I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem..

Gypsy hugs

Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

ooh love that autumn pic!! we don't get much of those coloured leaves here in socal... but then we can where shorts and tank-tops year-round, so i'm good LOL!

great haiku with colourful imagery and smooth flow
thank you for sharing
shelley :)

 Comment Written 14-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 14-Nov-2023

Thank you, Shelley. I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem..

Gypsy hugs

Comment from Mark D. R.

Excellent

Gypsy,

Two lovers encounter an autumn rendezvous in your post. Your artwork and color scheme are nice complements to your few words. Nicely penned!

Mark

 Comment Written 14-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 14-Nov-2023

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

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Comment from Debi Pick Marquette

Excellent

Not only is your art remarkably beautiful, but so are the lovely words in your poem. I've yet to come here and not be dazzled by your creativity. Thank you for always giving me a sweet treat when I visit you at bedtime. Next time a cup of coffee would be nice w the sweets! LOL Big hugs
Love, Debi

 Comment Written 13-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 14-Nov-2023

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Love.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from Alexandra Trovato

Excellent

This is excellent beautiful work. Your presentation is very good. You use expressive words and colorful imagery that will draw in readers. I enjoyed reviewing this.
Best wishes,
Alexan

 Comment Written 13-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 14-Nov-2023

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

That's an interesting meeting arrangement - no specific time or day but the season and the indication of the timing in the color bursts in the leaves. I hope they meet!

 Comment Written 13-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 14-Nov-2023

LoL. Poor guys. Have to wait the whole season.... it's a poetic notion.

Thank you, big sister.

Love

Marival