Comment from patricia dillon

Excellent

I like your little rhymes. You are very ingenious. I had to look up scouse. Am I to take it that Minni was a native of Liverpool? I wish you the best of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 14-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 14-Nov-2023

Thank you for taking the time to read and review my work. With kind regards

reply by patricia dillon on 14-Nov-2023

You're welcome.

Comment from Kerry L Batchelder

Excellent

Very cute adorable poem about a mischievous little mouse. Clever choice of words and what a cute apology gift, scouse (delicious stew). Great job! I love the color choice as well for the background.

 Comment Written 13-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 13-Nov-2023

Thank you for taking the time to read and review my work. With kind regards

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Nice presentation.
-The note was helpful.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-Very good opening lines about
Minni and her neighbor.
-You do a good job showing
how Minni felt, and then she
did what a lot of people do;
made something that made
her feel better and that she
could have for dinner. Maybe she'd
even share with Mrs. Grouse.
-You could take this to another
level in a different poem.
-Well done; good luck!!!

 Comment Written 13-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 13-Nov-2023

Thank you for taking the time to read and review my work. With kind regards

reply by Pam (respa) on 13-Nov-2023

You are very welcome.