Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

LOVE daisies!!

a great haiku - but shouldn't the -dash- be after the first line?
dusk over the valley--

last warmth cuddles
in the flowers

or you can make is a 4-liner...
dusk over the valley--

last warmth
cuddles
in the flowers


eh just some thoughts for you to kick around lol

nice haiku with great imagery... and daisies :-D

thank you for sharing
shelley :)

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 04-Nov-2023

Hello, the pause is before in the flowers because it requires a moment to see the ....flowers full of dusk... it is a zen moment to realize that all nature is interconnected. I did add a comma at the end of first line.

Excellent entry for the 100 Word Flash Fiction writing prompt contest.

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

Gypsy

reply by shelley kaye on 04-Nov-2023

ahhh! okay! 🤔😁👍

Comment from jmdg1954

Excellent

Here in New Jersey we've witnessed the last of our summer flowers in bloom as temps recently plunged into the mid-twenties... Brrrrrrrr.

I could relate to this haiku.
Thank you, Gypsy for posting.
John

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 04-Nov-2023

Thank you very much, John. (*÷*)

Gypsy hugs

Comment from GWHARGIS

Excellent

This was a beautiful poem. I liked the use of the eord cuddles and warmth. It is so appropriate for the way the weather has been changing here. I had to bring my plants inside. Now my porch looks barren. Great poem. Gretchen

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 03-Nov-2023

Thank you very much, Gretchen.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from aryr

Excellent

This was realistic, Gypsy. The dual pictures were phenomenal. Your words were great, they showed the dusk and they showed the warmth in the flowers. This was done well and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 03-Nov-2023

Thank you very much, Aryr. Blessed be.

Gypsy hugs

reply by aryr on 03-Nov-2023

You are so welcome, Gypsy.

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

I like how you personified the "warmth" as cuddling in the flowers and it is that bit of sunlight that remains in plant life that continues to feed and nourish the plants. Lovely dusk poem!

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 03-Nov-2023

Thank you very much, big sister.

Love

Marival

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

When I saw my PM box and saw your name twice, I thought, 'it's amazing how she can post two perfect poems daily.' I struggle getting one post a week and I finished writing it a year ago. You're amazing.

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 03-Nov-2023

Thank you very much, Barbara. I practice a lot so it's easy for me to write 2 poems a day. The presentation is what takes more time but I enjoy it.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from Alexandra Trovato

Excellent

This is an excellent haiku poem! It is full of colorful imagery and expressive words. The presentation is colorful and the images match your words.

Alex

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 03-Nov-2023

Thank you very much, Alex.

Gypsy hugs