Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

...and peace before it blows up in the bombs and machine guns...
sorry, didn't mean to rain on this great dove poem
which had nice imagery and smooth flow -
i love the image of feathers gliding on a morning breeze
the the second pic is way cool!

thank you for sharing
shelley :)

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 04-Nov-2023

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

Gypsy

Comment from GWHARGIS

Excellent

Another stunning poem. The dove and the dawn make me think about new beginnings. Then it seems so fleeting. Like a secret. This was beautiful and made me feel peaceful. Gretchen

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 03-Nov-2023

Thank you very much, Gretchen.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

I like concept of the visual effects of those downy dove feathers echoing the "last specks of dawn" just as the birds wake up and fly away to forage for food. A lovely morning poem!

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 03-Nov-2023

Thank you very much, big sister. (*÷*) I appreciate your kind review.

Love

Marival

Comment from aryr

Excellent

What a wonderful haiku, Gypsy. I loved the dual pictures, they were perfect for this one. Further I loved your words- suggested that the feathers were captured on the dawn. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 03-Nov-2023

Thank you very much, Aryr. Blessed be.

Gypsy hugs

reply by aryr on 03-Nov-2023

Most welcome, Gypsy.

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

Perfect artwork, perfect poem, both go together to cause evoke a wonderful peaceful emotion in your readers. Thank you for blessing us with your talent. I appreciate it and I'm sure others do too.

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 03-Nov-2023

Thank you very much, Barbara.

Gypsy hugs