Spooky Evening
How a witch can bring humor to trick or treaters.32 total reviews
Comment from Thesis
I read this not knowing what to expect. However, I was pleasantly surprised how it was constructed and how it set the scene for the spirit of the holiday. Nice job.
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2023
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I read this not knowing what to expect. However, I was pleasantly surprised how it was constructed and how it set the scene for the spirit of the holiday. Nice job.
Comment Written 03-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2023
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from John Ciarmello
Hi, RJ. This is a spooky poem that's perfect for adults and children. It was an enjoyable read. There's a lot of passion in this piece and I can tell you enjoy this time of the year. Best, JohnC
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2023
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Hi, RJ. This is a spooky poem that's perfect for adults and children. It was an enjoyable read. There's a lot of passion in this piece and I can tell you enjoy this time of the year. Best, JohnC
Comment Written 03-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2023
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from lindafisher
This is a really entertaining poem about halloween. You have been very descriptive of your characters. The nervousness of the kids and the pumpkins grin, love it.
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2023
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This is a really entertaining poem about halloween. You have been very descriptive of your characters. The nervousness of the kids and the pumpkins grin, love it.
Comment Written 03-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2023
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
Kids love when adults open their doors all dressed up, It's a sign that we keep childhood with us as we get older, if we choose to do so. I do! This is a very cute rhyming poem and there is a lot of imagery which brings the words to life! Excellent work and entry for the contest challenge!
Best wishes,
Alex
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2023
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Kids love when adults open their doors all dressed up, It's a sign that we keep childhood with us as we get older, if we choose to do so. I do! This is a very cute rhyming poem and there is a lot of imagery which brings the words to life! Excellent work and entry for the contest challenge!
Best wishes,
Alex
Comment Written 02-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2023
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from royowen
When I was young I'd never heard of Halloween, it simply wasn't a concept in Australia, but I'm still not fond, I think it's the wrong message for people, oh o know it seems like fun, and it has drifted quite a distance from where it began. But beautifully written my friend, no denying the skill, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2023
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When I was young I'd never heard of Halloween, it simply wasn't a concept in Australia, but I'm still not fond, I think it's the wrong message for people, oh o know it seems like fun, and it has drifted quite a distance from where it began. But beautifully written my friend, no denying the skill, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 02-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2023
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written written poem for the Halloween poetry contest. You used great descriptive words and very neat imagery from the art work you chose. Best wishes in the contest. teri
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2023
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This is a very well written written poem for the Halloween poetry contest. You used great descriptive words and very neat imagery from the art work you chose. Best wishes in the contest. teri
Comment Written 01-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2023
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A fun Halloween poem for the contest and you included all the aspects of a fun evening pumpkins, candy and mischief, a fun ride, good luck, love Dolly x x x x
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2023
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A fun Halloween poem for the contest and you included all the aspects of a fun evening pumpkins, candy and mischief, a fun ride, good luck, love Dolly x x x x
Comment Written 01-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2023
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from JSD
You've listed this as 'General Fiction'. I don't know if you can change it to 'Poetry'. It would display differently then. This is a most entertaining Halloween poem, full of the right mix of spookiness and fun. Well done and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2023
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You've listed this as 'General Fiction'. I don't know if you can change it to 'Poetry'. It would display differently then. This is a most entertaining Halloween poem, full of the right mix of spookiness and fun. Well done and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2023
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from Wayne Fowler
Very clever and cute. I like it.
What was the witch's spell? The pumpkin grinning?
Nice floe and rhyming. It was easy to read.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2023
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Very clever and cute. I like it.
What was the witch's spell? The pumpkin grinning?
Nice floe and rhyming. It was easy to read.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2023
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from Neonewman
Good evening RJ. I love this time of the year all the trick-or-treaters in the fun costumes about. I really enjoyed what you've done with this piece and hope you had a happy Halloween. Best of luck in the contest.
God bless,
Steve
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2023
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Good evening RJ. I love this time of the year all the trick-or-treaters in the fun costumes about. I really enjoyed what you've done with this piece and hope you had a happy Halloween. Best of luck in the contest.
God bless,
Steve
Comment Written 31-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2023
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Thank you for your review.
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My pleasure, RJ.
