Between the pages
A story of love52 total reviews
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
Nice and sweet. The curlicue type illustrates the romantic nature of the poetry. The picture looked out of focus. Did you enlarge the print from a smaller one? Have a good week. Karen
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Nice and sweet. The curlicue type illustrates the romantic nature of the poetry. The picture looked out of focus. Did you enlarge the print from a smaller one? Have a good week. Karen
Comment Written 13-Nov-2023
Comment from Navada
This is a lovely tribute with a pleasing rhyming scheme. I like the theme of the red rose and the discovery of it pressed between the pages at the end - this is a poignant and touching image. One suggestion for future reference - perhaps you could think about the metre of each line as well, so that they are all a similar length and rhythm? I think this could add extra impact to your rhymes. Thanks for the share.
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This is a lovely tribute with a pleasing rhyming scheme. I like the theme of the red rose and the discovery of it pressed between the pages at the end - this is a poignant and touching image. One suggestion for future reference - perhaps you could think about the metre of each line as well, so that they are all a similar length and rhythm? I think this could add extra impact to your rhymes. Thanks for the share.
Comment Written 13-Nov-2023
Comment from Pearl Edwards
A beautifully poignant poem Willie and you're right true love never ends even when one has passed from this life. What a lovely find, the rose between the pages. Beautiful finish to a lovely poem. Cheers
Valda
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A beautifully poignant poem Willie and you're right true love never ends even when one has passed from this life. What a lovely find, the rose between the pages. Beautiful finish to a lovely poem. Cheers
Valda
Comment Written 13-Nov-2023
Comment from jake cosmos aller
another wonderful poem in a cowboy poetry style about the love of a beautiful woman with red roses in her hair, remembering how she looked with the flowers there.
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another wonderful poem in a cowboy poetry style about the love of a beautiful woman with red roses in her hair, remembering how she looked with the flowers there.
Comment Written 13-Nov-2023
Comment from gramalot8
What a very sweet love poem! I'm so sorry you lost your love do early. I can totally relate. I got married to my first love when I was only 18 and he was 19. Unfortunately he was struck by lightning at age 20. I've always wondered what our lives would have been like together. Good luck in the contest.
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What a very sweet love poem! I'm so sorry you lost your love do early. I can totally relate. I got married to my first love when I was only 18 and he was 19. Unfortunately he was struck by lightning at age 20. I've always wondered what our lives would have been like together. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 13-Nov-2023
Comment from l.raven
Hi Willie, so beautifully written...and yet
so sad...I am so sorry for your loss...
your poem has great rhythm and rhyme...
I love how you started with the Rose in her hair...
and you found it left pressed in her diary...
such a touching poem...
I love your poem sweet guy...and love your story told...
so very beautifully written...picture perfect...love Linda xxoo
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Hi Willie, so beautifully written...and yet
so sad...I am so sorry for your loss...
your poem has great rhythm and rhyme...
I love how you started with the Rose in her hair...
and you found it left pressed in her diary...
such a touching poem...
I love your poem sweet guy...and love your story told...
so very beautifully written...picture perfect...love Linda xxoo
Comment Written 13-Nov-2023
Comment from Daylily
This is a beautiful love story written in poetic verses. The font is a bit difficult to read, however. I really like the title you are using as it connects perfectly with the message.
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This is a beautiful love story written in poetic verses. The font is a bit difficult to read, however. I really like the title you are using as it connects perfectly with the message.
Comment Written 13-Nov-2023
Comment from Lea Tonin1
Oh Willy that's such a beautiful poem. I'm so sorry you lost her so soon. I would love could be like that for everyone would enjoy that would be. What a gorgeous script you have chosen as well love it! I see no issues with grammar or punctuation or sentence structure word choices. You've got a beautiful rhyming poem here that rolls off tongue. Best of luck to you hope you have in a great night!
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Oh Willy that's such a beautiful poem. I'm so sorry you lost her so soon. I would love could be like that for everyone would enjoy that would be. What a gorgeous script you have chosen as well love it! I see no issues with grammar or punctuation or sentence structure word choices. You've got a beautiful rhyming poem here that rolls off tongue. Best of luck to you hope you have in a great night!
Comment Written 12-Nov-2023
Comment from lauralumummu
A really sweet poem and a sad love story. Roses are my favorite flower. I love your rhyme sequence and I think rhyming poetry is the best but sometimes it flows for me in a different way. All the best Laura
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A really sweet poem and a sad love story. Roses are my favorite flower. I love your rhyme sequence and I think rhyming poetry is the best but sometimes it flows for me in a different way. All the best Laura
Comment Written 12-Nov-2023
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
This is excellent work. Your presentation is very good. You use expressive words and colorful imagery that readers will enjoy as I did.
Best wishes,
Alex
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This is excellent work. Your presentation is very good. You use expressive words and colorful imagery that readers will enjoy as I did.
Best wishes,
Alex
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Comment Written 12-Nov-2023
