Between the pages
A story of love52 total reviews
Comment from Mario PIERRE
Beautifully written poem. It has a tender and conveys a nostalgic feel. The rhymes are perfectly chosen and make sense all throughout, unlike those I sometimes read which are forced, just to make the verses rhyme. I read it with great pleasure.
Mario
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Beautifully written poem. It has a tender and conveys a nostalgic feel. The rhymes are perfectly chosen and make sense all throughout, unlike those I sometimes read which are forced, just to make the verses rhyme. I read it with great pleasure.
Mario
Comment Written 13-Nov-2023
Comment from Lisasview
Hi Willie,
This feels like a true love story... actually it made me cry.
I love the font , the rose and of course the poem.
True love really never dies or ends...
Lisa
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Hi Willie,
This feels like a true love story... actually it made me cry.
I love the font , the rose and of course the poem.
True love really never dies or ends...
Lisa
Comment Written 13-Nov-2023
Comment from Boogienights
I'm sorry you lost your wife. This poem is beautiful, about true love and devotion. I have a diary that holds the pressed carnation that my future husband gave me 40 years ago. Thanks for sharing.
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I'm sorry you lost your wife. This poem is beautiful, about true love and devotion. I have a diary that holds the pressed carnation that my future husband gave me 40 years ago. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 13-Nov-2023
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Between the Pages, presented with seven ABCB-rhymed quatrains, follows the love of a lifetime from the first presentation through to the fond and unforgettable memories. So nice.
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This poem, Between the Pages, presented with seven ABCB-rhymed quatrains, follows the love of a lifetime from the first presentation through to the fond and unforgettable memories. So nice.
Comment Written 13-Nov-2023
Comment from Barry Penfold
What a lovely poem. The red rose, such a symbol of love and expressed in a simple but effective rhyme. Well done. Take care and have a wonderful day.
Cheers
Barry Penfold.
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What a lovely poem. The red rose, such a symbol of love and expressed in a simple but effective rhyme. Well done. Take care and have a wonderful day.
Cheers
Barry Penfold.
Comment Written 13-Nov-2023
Comment from zanya
A-h-h such beautiful sentiments expressed here in this poem- restores faith in humanity!! - a quiet, profound expression of true love with a precious rose as an outward sign. Thanks for sharing.
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A-h-h such beautiful sentiments expressed here in this poem- restores faith in humanity!! - a quiet, profound expression of true love with a precious rose as an outward sign. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 13-Nov-2023
Comment from jim vecchio
How beautiful and touching! My wife died too soon, last year and my niece, going through the house, also found a journal my wife wrote about me, detailing our times together from the first date. I'd rather have that, and I'm sure you rather have yours, than all the money in the world!
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How beautiful and touching! My wife died too soon, last year and my niece, going through the house, also found a journal my wife wrote about me, detailing our times together from the first date. I'd rather have that, and I'm sure you rather have yours, than all the money in the world!
Comment Written 13-Nov-2023
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Poetically written, and remindful of how love can suddenly appear whether a rose behind an ear or a wink across the dance floor. I have and remain fully committed to my love. Thanks for the reminder.
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Poetically written, and remindful of how love can suddenly appear whether a rose behind an ear or a wink across the dance floor. I have and remain fully committed to my love. Thanks for the reminder.
Comment Written 13-Nov-2023
Comment from RICH SAND
A touching and well constructed poem. Well done Willie. It's also evoking sadness when the reader learns that the relationship breaks down. It draws on the heartstrings, Best wishes, Rich.
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A touching and well constructed poem. Well done Willie. It's also evoking sadness when the reader learns that the relationship breaks down. It draws on the heartstrings, Best wishes, Rich.
Comment Written 13-Nov-2023
Comment from Jesse James Doty
This is kind and romantic. This poem speaks of a true love so dear that even though she left too soon the love will always be there. I like the signature font and the rose-colored lettering. Pictures have a way of telling the story for us. This one does just that. Thanks for sharing this lovely heartrendering poem.
Jesse
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This is kind and romantic. This poem speaks of a true love so dear that even though she left too soon the love will always be there. I like the signature font and the rose-colored lettering. Pictures have a way of telling the story for us. This one does just that. Thanks for sharing this lovely heartrendering poem.
Jesse
Comment Written 13-Nov-2023
