Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill

Excellent

Boy, can you write a story or what? The story or saga is completely engaging. You never slow down on the action. It just keeps building. Grand writing. Great pictures. No Need To Reply Karen

 Comment Written 26-Nov-2023

Comment from gramalot8

Excellent

This is a well written and creative work. Your storyline is very good. With your expressive words and imaginative imagery you bring your characters alive for your readers. Thanks for sharing this with us.

 Comment Written 29-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2023

Thank you! :) I appreciate your kind words. This is very encouraging. I'm thrilled you enjoyed.

Sincerely,
Shana :)

Comment from Iza Deleanu

Excellent

Poor Jem, lost in darkness and somehow tricked to give away the secret place of his friends and allies. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.

 Comment Written 29-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2023

Thank you, Iza :) Yes, Jem is spellbound by the signet ring his father has given him, making him forget his true family. But his memories of his beloved and the Breedline Covenant is slowly returning.

I'm glad you enjoyed. I really had fun creating this chapter. I had to split the chapter up since it was so long. I will continue it next week.

Thanks again for your positive feedback.
Sincerely,
Shana :)

Comment from Pearl Edwards

Excellent

Yes, I really enjoyed this chapter, even though it's the first of your story I've read I found it easy to read and it certainly held my interest. A great read. Cheers

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 28-Oct-2023

Thank you, Pearl :) I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter. I hope you read more of my Breedline adventures.
I appreciate your awesome feedback and generous stars.

Sincerely,
Shana :)

Comment from Navada

Excellent

This is the first time I've encountered this series. What an interesting concept! The premise of shape shifting gives you plenty of opportunities for story development and it could take you in so many different directions. Thanks for sharing this and good luck with your continued publishing.

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 28-Oct-2023

Thank you, Navada :) I appreciate your awesome feedback and generous stars. I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. It was fun to create.

Sincerely,
Shana :)

Comment from royowen

Exceptional

An excellent episode Jem has been drugged, and loss of memory is one of its side effects, but where is Mia, and more importantly where is he, and what is a breedline covenant, will he remember again, and how were, and why was there ash all around. Well done Shana, blessing Roy
Typo : Through the smouldering (runes' ruins?

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 28-Oct-2023

Thank you, dear friend :) Jem has a signet ring that was given to him by Alexander. It has a binding spell that makes him forget his family, including Jace. But he starts to remember. Things are going to get dicey.

I appreciate your awesome feedback and for catching my misspelled word. Great eye! :)

Always your fan,
Shana :)

reply by royowen on 29-Oct-2023

I think his memory will come back despite the ring

reply by the author on 29-Oct-2023

Yes, you are correct. :)

Comment from Alexandra Trovato

Excellent

This is excellent and creative work. Your presentation is very good. You use expressive words and colorful imagery that will draw in a readers.

Best wishes,

Alexandra

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 28-Oct-2023

Thank you, Alexandra :) I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. I had fun creating it. Your motivating feedback and generous stars made my day.

Sincerely,
Shana :)