Comment from Wendyanne

Excellent

Sounds wonderful! With just a few very well chosen words you have managed to describe a wonderful scene of breakfast at sunrise with a lovely egg sunny side up of course. Well done

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 28-Oct-2023

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

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Comment from June Sargent

Excellent

Beautiful example of haiku that is highlighted by the perfect artwork. I love the sartori - eggs sunny side up bring out the child in me. Reminds me of breakfast with my dad...

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2023

Thank you very much, June (*=*) Have a wonderful weekend!

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Comment from Chrissy710

Excellent

Hi Gypsy
Yes this creates the desired Summery image
of enjoying a warm breakfast outside excellent Satori
Cheers Chris
Enjoy the egg
I love eggs for breaky but always flip them over lol

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2023

Thank you very much, Chris (*=*) Have a wonderful weekend!

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Comment from LateBloomer

Excellent

Hi Gypsy, this is such a fun poem. I love the imagery and word play for "sunny." Of special note:

egg sunny side up
(Good imagery, and good satori line.)

Well done. Great photo. This poem made me smile. My apologies for being out of touch. Life has been hectic. Be well, stay safe. Xo. M

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2023

Thank you very much, Margaret (*=*) Have a wonderful weekend!

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Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

A perfectly formed egg here and I love eggs for breakfast and have mine poached every time. A fine post, few words to make my mouth water, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2023

Thank you very much, Dolly (*=*) Have a wonderful weekend!

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reply by Dolly'sPoems on 28-Oct-2023

You too x x x

Comment from Ulla

Excellent

Hola, Marival. Absolutely, eggs sunny side up reflects the mood of the dawning day. I love it. The picture to accompany it, just says it all. UN abrazo, Ulla xx

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2023

Hola, guapa,

Thank you very much, Ulla (*=*) Have a wonderful weekend!

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Comment from Alexandra Trovato

Excellent

This is excellent work. Your presentation is very good. You use expressive words and colorful imagery that will draw in a readers.
Best wishes,
Alexandra

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 26-Oct-2023

Thank you very much, Alexandra.

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Comment from gramalot8

Excellent

This is an "eggcelent" Haiku. Enjoyed your beautiful photo attachment. Yummy looking sunny side up eggs are perfect on a sunlit morning. Thanks for sharing this with us.

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 26-Oct-2023

Eggcellent.... lol

Thank you very much, my friend.

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Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

The artwork you chose works perfectly with the poem. Sunrise and breakfast, great combination. One can't go wrong with them. Once again, you've shown us you're a great poet.

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 26-Oct-2023

Thank you very much, Barbara.

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Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

i prefer poached eggs lol

cool haiku - love the satori!
awesome pic!!
nice imagery and smooth flow of words - and funny too lol

thank you for sharing - and for the morning giggle
shelley :)

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 26-Oct-2023

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

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