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2023 Gypsy's Haiku

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Comment from barbara.wilkey
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I am a fan of mountains. Of course, I also enjoy the beaches. But the majestic mountains are my thing. Thank you for highlighting them for me in this beautiful poem.

 Comment Written 24-Oct-2023


reply by the author on 24-Oct-2023
    Barbara,
    Thank you very much for the lovely review and kind words.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from GWHARGIS
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The way I felt when I read this was almost fantastical. The imagery of the dragonfly with its wings shimmering in the twilight was so perfect. Beautifully written. Thank you for sharing. Gretchen

 Comment Written 23-Oct-2023


reply by the author on 23-Oct-2023
    Thank you very much, Gretchen, your kind and insightful feedback. Have a wonderful week.

    Gypsy hugs

Comment from shelley kaye
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very cool imagery of mountains in autumn and the sunset on dragonfly wings
good word choices and smooth flow
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
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 Comment Written 23-Oct-2023


reply by the author on 23-Oct-2023
    Thank you very much, Shelley, your kind and insightful feedback. Have a wonderful week.

    Gypsy hugs

Comment from Daylily
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This is really gorgeous...both the message and the presentation. It is a very soothing posting and I like how the light is showing up on the dragonfly wings. Smiles, Lily

 Comment Written 23-Oct-2023


reply by the author on 23-Oct-2023
    Thank you very much, Lily, I appreciate your kind review. May you have a fabulous week.

    gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
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That's cool to think of the the light's rays at dusk "tangled" with the flight dragonfly wings. The light must be reflected off the iridescent wings. A lovely picture!

 Comment Written 23-Oct-2023


reply by the author on 23-Oct-2023
    Thank you very much, Big Sister, I appreciate your kind review. May you have a fabulous week.

    love
    marival