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Tales of our Times

Viewing comments for Chapter 12 "Wreckage"
Collection of short stories

8 total reviews 
Comment from Wendyanne
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This is a thought-provoking piece of well written flash fiction about a very controversial subject, ie, global warming. I fear for the lives of young people and future generations. Well done.

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2023

reply by the author on 28-Oct-2023
    Thanks for reading and reviewing zanya
Comment from LJbutterfly
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Your story is well written, and delivers an important message. It's the older guys who didn't believe they could damage the earth. Now the next generation has to figure out how to fix it. Great short story. Best wishes in the contest.

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2023

reply by the author on 28-Oct-2023
    Great review zanya
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
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This is excellent work. Your ability to tell a story is very good. Your expressive words, colorful imagery, and authentic dialogue will draw in a readers.

Best wishes,

Alexandra






 Comment Written 21-Oct-2023

reply by the author on 28-Oct-2023
    Great review zanya
Comment from Ulla
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Well many generations of us did. Ever since the Industrial Revolution it has only been a question of time. So Mike had a point. All the best in the contest, Zanya. Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 20-Oct-2023

reply by the author on 28-Oct-2023
    Great review zanya
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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I love that: (Global Warning) Zanya, you made me smile here, this is a cure little Flash fiction for the contest and I wish you luck, loved the humour, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 20-Oct-2023

reply by the author on 28-Oct-2023
    Great review zanya
Comment from Sanku
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Shouldn't it be 'Global warming?"
Very meaningful .If not now the time will soon come when grandchildren would blame the older generation for the destruction of earth.

 Comment Written 20-Oct-2023

reply by the author on 28-Oct-2023
    Thanks for reviewing zanya
Comment from Douglas Goff
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It is easy for the young to blame the old for...everything. Ha!

Great piece of writing. I am not sure about this sentence:
You aul fellas wrecked the planet.'
(What is aul?)
D

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2023

reply by the author on 28-Oct-2023
    Thanks for reading zanya
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
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I'm sure that's what children are now believing and I wouldn't blame them! Your well expressed succinct little flash conveys a very credible little scenario. You just need inverted commas at the start of "You aul fellas wrecked the planet." Well done and good luck! Debbie

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2023

reply by the author on 28-Oct-2023
    Great review zanya