Cindy
A fairy tale with some quirky twists4 total reviews
Comment from Teri7
This is a really great Fractured Fairy Tale you have penned for the contest. You used great descriptive words and this was so much better than the original one. I love the ending. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2023
This is a really great Fractured Fairy Tale you have penned for the contest. You used great descriptive words and this was so much better than the original one. I love the ending. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 20-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2023
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Hi Teri! Thank you for the excellent rating and the best wishes. I appreciate that you took the time to read my story and make comments. Have a blessed weekend!
Comment from Tom Horonzy
The spirit of a fractured fairy tale is entrenched herein and tickled me pink. Thank you for participating in this challenge. I find writing fractured fairy tales a relief from other subjects too often embossed in this tome.
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2023
The spirit of a fractured fairy tale is entrenched herein and tickled me pink. Thank you for participating in this challenge. I find writing fractured fairy tales a relief from other subjects too often embossed in this tome.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2023
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Hi Tom! Thank you for the excellent review and the feedback. I'm so glad you enjoyed my story and took the time to read it. Have a blessed week!
Comment from JSD
Excellent twist on the well known fairy tale. And why not. So she loses the glamorous clothes but she's the same girl. Very good idea and cleverly written.
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2023
Excellent twist on the well known fairy tale. And why not. So she loses the glamorous clothes but she's the same girl. Very good idea and cleverly written.
Comment Written 11-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2023
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Hi JSD!
Thank you for the excellent rating and the feedback. I'm glad you enjoyed my story. Have a blessed evening!
Comment from JPGeo
Aww, this is so cute, touching and with a personal touch. I like it very much. I suspect it comes quite close to the true story. It is a fabulous fractured fairy tale and I hope it gets many votes.
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2023
Aww, this is so cute, touching and with a personal touch. I like it very much. I suspect it comes quite close to the true story. It is a fabulous fractured fairy tale and I hope it gets many votes.
Comment Written 11-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2023
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Hi JPGeo!
Thank you for your excellent rating and feedback. I'm glad you enjoyed my story. Have a blessed evening!