Comment from oliver818

Excellent

This is a nice poem with a pleasant rhythm, and I like the atmosphere you build, it's intense and powerful. Thanks for sharing this and have a really great day.

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 11-Oct-2023

Thanks for taking the time to read and review. It's appreciated!

Comment from Eleri

Excellent

This is a good description of a night time storm, with calm in the morning. Your poem has the correct number of syllables per line for the contest and reads well. I wish you all the best with it
Eleri

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 11-Oct-2023

Thanks for the input. I appreciate you taing the time to read and review. Have a great day!