Comment from GWHARGIS

Excellent

I was thinking how this could be a poem of deepest love for anyone who is special in your life. Not just a lover or significant other. It is about those you hold dearest in life. Great poem. Gretchen

 Comment Written 28-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 28-Sep-2023

yes, it could be anyone

Thank you very much, Gretchen, I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem. Have a wonderful day.

Gypsy

Comment from kahpot

Excellent

The pond of life, yes, where all learn to grow with the help of experience, as sometimes the waters can be murky, an excellent haiku, very well written and presented****kahpot

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2023

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from aryr

Excellent

This was a fantastic haiku and an appropriate dedication, Gypsy. Your words were great, they showed that the love was strong between you both. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2023

Thank you very much, my friend. May you have a wonderful day. Blessed be.

Gypsy hugs

reply by aryr on 26-Sep-2023

Most welcome, Gypsy.

Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

this was a great love poem for your kids
love the "pond of life" line - so true!
good imagery.
a smooth flow of words throughtout

thank you for sharing
shelley :)

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2023

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from Jumbo J

Excellent

Hi MariVal,
your trademark colour, hey((((((, my trade mark colour.

Stunning presentation!
I love the bloom and radiant love you speak of... and it is a pond of life.

Sometimes even a swamp can cultivate the most beautiful results where life thrives from humble beginnings.

What a magic dedication MariVal... I'm sure they'll love it. I know I did.

With our thoughts we create...
petals of probabilities.

Warmest regards,
James.

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2023

Thank you very much, James.

Warmest regards
MariVal

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Yes, love can make the difficult pond of life completely beautiful like the lotus flower which grows in sludge. Great metaphor in your poem and beautifully illustrated!

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 25-Sep-2023

Thank you very much, big sister.... I appreciate your kind review and feedback.

Love,

Marival

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

I am positive your children will love this poem. I know my would, we'll they're boys so honestly not so much. My daughters in law would though. You didn't include any sports so my guys wouldn't engage. LOL Your presentation was perfect.

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 25-Sep-2023

Hehe... I have one son and one grandson. :)

Thank you very much, Barbara... I appreciate your kind review and feedback.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from Raul1

Excellent

I have enjoyed reading your piece of poetry. It's beautifully written. The sentences flow with clarity. It is clear and concise. Excellent work! Thank you for sharing!

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 25-Sep-2023

Thank you very much, Raul... I appreciate your kind review and feedback.

Gypsy hugs