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2023 Gypsy's Haiku

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Comment from Mary Vigasin
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This is so gorgeous in words and images. It is a dreamy Haiku of pink flowers, pink moon, and blushing flowers.
So beautiful and well done.
Best wishes,
Mary

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2023

reply by the author on 26-Sep-2023
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from kahpot
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Love this one, the image your descriptive words give, cuddle, blushing etc. are excellent, and your chosen artwork seems as though the moon is very much trying to reach the wildflowers, very well written****kahpot

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2023

reply by the author on 26-Sep-2023
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from aryr
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This was a great haiku, Gypsy. I absolutely love a pink moon, anything to do with a full moon. It is so gorgeous! I loved your words. They made so much sense. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2023

reply by the author on 26-Sep-2023
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Blessed be.

    Gypsy hugs
reply by aryr on 26-Sep-2023
    Most welcome, Gypsy.
Comment from shelley kaye
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the water in the pic looks like blood -- i like it... lol

great blushing pink haiku for our moon
good imagery and smooth flow

thank you for sharing
shelley :)



 Comment Written 26-Sep-2023

reply by the author on 26-Sep-2023
    Spooky sisters. LoL I love horror movies. Stories. Poems.... anything :)

    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy hugs
reply by shelley kaye on 26-Sep-2023
    lol! me too! so does my daughter! LOL
Comment from Jumbo J
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Hi Gypsy Queen,
there's a pink full moon? You do learn something new each day. I have never seen one, how spectacular.

A beautiful pairing of the colour between moon and flower. I do love flowers, flowers of all sorts, plants that flower, trees etc... but the hay fever from certain pollens at this time of the year down here, not so much.

Wildflowers are especially special when in full bloom. There is always large numbers of them creating a stunning display.

I love the image this poem created in my mind seeing both images. Your words painted the scene, my mind cuddled it... beautiful!

With our thoughts we create...
an intimate moment.

Warmest regards,
James.

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2023

reply by the author on 26-Sep-2023
    Thank you very much, James. It's always good to hear from you.

    Native Americans have names for all the full moons...

    Wolf Moon (January)
    Snow Moon (February)
    Worm Moon (March)
    Pink Moon (April)
    Flower Moon (May)
    Strawberry Moon (June)
    Buck Moon (July)
    Sturgeon Moon (August)
    Harvest Moon (September)
    Hunter?s Moon (October)
    Beaver Moon (November)
    Cold Moon (December

    When is your birthday? You probably told me before but I forgot. :(

    Warmest regards
    MariVal
reply by Jumbo J on 26-Sep-2023
    Let's just say If you hear me howling you'll know we are connected Renia Lobo Gitana:))
    So the colour of the moon isn't actually pink?
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2023
    IIt's not springtime that makes the moon pink. Instead what's happening is particles in the atmosphere are scattering the light from the full moon, filtering out the cooler colors and just leaving those bold oranges, reds and pinks

    Not as much fun as believing it's pink color.

    I'll keep my bionic ears at the lookout for your howling. Hahaha
Comment from lyenochka
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I remember the Full Pink Moon. You wrote about all the different full moons at one time. It's perfect to illustrate with the phlox flowers. I like the personification of the moon.

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2023

reply by the author on 26-Sep-2023
    Big sister, thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Love

    Marival
Comment from Raul1
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I have enjoyed reading your beautiful poem and it is impressive. The sentences flow with clarity. Excellent work! No mistakes found. I like it. Thank you for sharing!

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2023

reply by the author on 25-Sep-2023
    Thank you very much, Raul... I appreciate your kind review and feedback.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from GWHARGIS
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I had never heard of the Pink moon until recently. I happened to see a chart on Instagram. It's very cool. I'm color blind so I miss a lot of subtleties. The imagery was magic in your poem. Gretchen

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2023

reply by the author on 25-Sep-2023
    Thank you very much, Gretchen... I appreciate your kind review and feedback. You don't see all the colors?

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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I'm in a hotel room trying to catchup on my 78 PM's and your gorgeous poem popped up. It caused me smile after a day of fighting traffic. The moon and the words are perfect.

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2023

reply by the author on 25-Sep-2023
    78? Wow... the most I have is 40 but I'm a slow reader. LoL

    Thank you very much, Barbara... I appreciate your kind review and feedback.

    Gypsy hugs