Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

It seems a true beauty wouldn't understand the effect she has on people because she'd be concerned with more important things than that. Thank you for sharing this beautiful presentation with us.

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 20-Sep-2023

Thank you very much for the review.

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Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

sometimes i wish i would stir up thoughts in others LOL
or maybe that's why i write...

anyway, a great thought-provoking free verse
good imagery and smooth flow
cool pic and colours

thank you for sharing
shelley :)

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 20-Sep-2023

Thank you very much for the review.

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Comment from aryr

Excellent

What a beautiful free verse, Gypsy. The pictures were amazing, they seemed to paint the picture well. Your words just added that final touch. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 20-Sep-2023

Thank you very much for the review. Blessed be.

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reply by aryr on 21-Sep-2023

Most welcome, Gypsy.

Comment from Mike Stevens

Excellent

Another fine poem, Gypsy----brings back memories of high school, when hormones overrode common sense and a girl like her would walk by and Little Mike would stand up and salute her beauty!

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 20-Sep-2023

Thank you very much for the review.

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Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

It's a real beauty that doesn't know how beautiful she is. It's too bad that it causes women to envy and not just appreciate. It's too bad that it causes lustful fantasies in men. We should just appreciate the beautiful !

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 20-Sep-2023

Thank you very much for the review, big sister. I appreciate beautiful women, I don't feel envious, but when I was very young I did wish I was that beautiful. Eventough I was pretty, I didn't feel like it. (((sigh)))

love
marival

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reply by lyenochka on 20-Sep-2023

It's all in the confidence. I knew one gal who looked rather plain in my opinion but guys were falling all over themselves over her. She radiated confidence in her beauty.

reply by the author on 20-Sep-2023

It's true. Confident people are very attractive. The same with men. When I was manic in the past I was very confident and I made some bad decisions. I'm glad I don't get manic anymore although it was a lot of fun.

Comment from GWHARGIS

Exceptional

This was very cool. I liked how you never come out and say she is beautiful. You let us figure it out by the reactions of those around her. Then the magic she has that commands the attention of the Sun and the Moon. Beautiful and fantastical. Gretchen

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 20-Sep-2023

Gretchen, thank you for the exceptional review and kind words.

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Comment from kahpot

Excellent

This stirs the imagination, is she that beautiful, or unaware of her beauty, or maybe a lady of the night, or maybe a black widow, confused or not a wonderful read, I like poems that get me thinking, very well presented****kahpot

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 20-Sep-2023

Thank you for taking the time to read and review my poem.

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