Ramblings
Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "September 13th, 2023"I write everyday to a man who does not love me.
2 total reviews
Comment from Liz O'Neill
This has a power slap of gallows humor. Dare I say, it is hilarious. It this called gaining distorted pleasure at another's what? discomfort? Agony? Misfortune? The irony of this is many a reader will tragically identify. So, I guess we can say, you have not suffered in vain. You could be a stand up commedian like Tig Notaro A+
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2023
This has a power slap of gallows humor. Dare I say, it is hilarious. It this called gaining distorted pleasure at another's what? discomfort? Agony? Misfortune? The irony of this is many a reader will tragically identify. So, I guess we can say, you have not suffered in vain. You could be a stand up commedian like Tig Notaro A+
Comment Written 16-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2023
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Thank youuuu! It?s validating to say the least as I?m a spastic mess. Think a rubber band that gave up
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Thank youuuu! It?s validating to say the least as I?m a spastic mess. Think a rubber band that gave up
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Thank youuuu! It?s validating to say the least as I?m a spastic mess. Think a rubber band that gave up
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There's your delightful gallows humor again. Have you ever hear Tig Notaro? that's you
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
I do enjoy your ramblings. They're fun and some of them resonate with me which is always reassuring. I always think streams of consciousness are a delight both for the reader and the writer and we learn so much from just letter our minds unravel. I would personally prefer larger font and it may be a consideration next time for us oldies? But you've definitely got a great style here and have found a very entertaining genre. Thanks for sharing Debbie
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2023
I do enjoy your ramblings. They're fun and some of them resonate with me which is always reassuring. I always think streams of consciousness are a delight both for the reader and the writer and we learn so much from just letter our minds unravel. I would personally prefer larger font and it may be a consideration next time for us oldies? But you've definitely got a great style here and have found a very entertaining genre. Thanks for sharing Debbie
Comment Written 16-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2023
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Thank you, I edited the font size
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Thank you, I edited the font size
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Thank you, I edited the font size