As One
A shared life6 total reviews
Comment from Sally Law
This is super sweet in this form, Ginda. A real one from the heart too. Sending you my congratulations on your ribbon and my best to you both.
Sal XOs
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2023
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This is super sweet in this form, Ginda. A real one from the heart too. Sending you my congratulations on your ribbon and my best to you both.
Sal XOs
Comment Written 15-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2023
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Thank you, Sally. I so appreciate your good wishes.
Comment from Mary Vigasin
This is a beautiful sentimental poem. It truly expresses what love is between an old couple who have spent their years together.
I wish you good luck in the contest.
Best wishes,
Mary
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2023
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This is a beautiful sentimental poem. It truly expresses what love is between an old couple who have spent their years together.
I wish you good luck in the contest.
Best wishes,
Mary
Comment Written 14-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2023
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Thanks for reviewing and for your kind words.
Comment from Aiona
What a cute and short poem. To me, that is love. When someone's happiness is as good as one's own. Without that kind of love, no one would ever care for kids or elderly people. I think nowadays, that kind of attitude is labeled "codependent" as if it's something bad that must be avoided. Caring for someone should never be bad. It's when someone takes advantage of someone else's love.... that's the villain. Love is what makes the world go round, and somehow you encapsulated it in seven words.
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2023
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What a cute and short poem. To me, that is love. When someone's happiness is as good as one's own. Without that kind of love, no one would ever care for kids or elderly people. I think nowadays, that kind of attitude is labeled "codependent" as if it's something bad that must be avoided. Caring for someone should never be bad. It's when someone takes advantage of someone else's love.... that's the villain. Love is what makes the world go round, and somehow you encapsulated it in seven words.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2023
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Thanks for reviewing and for your kind words.
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
Quite Good
Great Even
Lovely
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reply by the author on 15-Sep-2023
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Quite Good
Great Even
Lovely
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Comment Written 14-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2023
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Thanks.
Comment from Kana2
Simple yet beautiful in It's message. It definitely is a very sweet poem, and I enjoy the sweetness it brought into my life. I always enjoy reading something positive for the day. Thanks for making that small thing to brighten my day. Well done!
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2023
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Simple yet beautiful in It's message. It definitely is a very sweet poem, and I enjoy the sweetness it brought into my life. I always enjoy reading something positive for the day. Thanks for making that small thing to brighten my day. Well done!
Comment Written 14-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2023
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Thanks for reviewing and for your kind words.
Comment from JSD
Impressive to put so much love and meaning into seven syllables. Too small a box really, but you have pulled it off successfully. We fully understand the closeness of your relationship. Well done and good luck in the competition.
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2023
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Impressive to put so much love and meaning into seven syllables. Too small a box really, but you have pulled it off successfully. We fully understand the closeness of your relationship. Well done and good luck in the competition.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2023
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Thanks for reviewing and for your kind words.
