Last Days
Written from someone at war2 total reviews
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
This is excellent, not only in the content but the way you have expressed your words to appear timeless, from any age. It's a poignant and very sweet letter which isn't overly sentimental but is very expressive and moving. Well done! Debbie
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2023
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This is excellent, not only in the content but the way you have expressed your words to appear timeless, from any age. It's a poignant and very sweet letter which isn't overly sentimental but is very expressive and moving. Well done! Debbie
Comment Written 10-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2023
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thank you for your kind review, and the stars, much appreciated
Comment from John Ciarmello
This is a touching piece, Jacquelyn!
The fact that it is written as a letter home from a soldier in a war elevates it and adds the depth it deserves. I enjoyed reading it, and I'm happy you pulled it out of the archives to share with all of us. Best, JohnC
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2023
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This is a touching piece, Jacquelyn!
The fact that it is written as a letter home from a soldier in a war elevates it and adds the depth it deserves. I enjoyed reading it, and I'm happy you pulled it out of the archives to share with all of us. Best, JohnC
Comment Written 10-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2023
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thank you for taking time to read my poem. thank you for your review, and the start rating. it is appreciated
